Comments received on poems by Nikita03



She
Empathic.writings said:

Yeeeeeeeeeeeeehawwwwwwww

August 27th, 2022 14:27

She
LittleTalks said:

the dullness, the agony, the overthinking.... the demons run wild. Nice verbiage and your words are very relatable. well done.

August 27th, 2022 14:25

My Real Mirage
Empathic.writings said:

No one is gone forever unless you let them. Grasp, maybe stubbornly.

February 22nd, 2022 09:23

Time to Breakup?
EthanMac said:

This Poem is well written and fairly relatable.
Thank you for writing this poem.

November 16th, 2021 13:38

Time to Breakup?
L. B. Mek said:

tight, end rhymes
and a lovely free flowing read
thanks for sharing

November 16th, 2021 06:27

Sleepless
L. B. Mek said:

\'The ideas pop piercing like a knife
Begging, \'please just give us a life\'
What life can we give you?
What can we do for you?
When we are bounded staring at these walls
And are counting our flaws and fall\'..
(insightful commentary
worded so enticingly poetic,
thanks for choosing to share)

August 12th, 2021 04:30

Sleepless
rebmasters said:

Beautiful ❤

Reminds me of one of my favourite lines from Hamlet, which is something like:

\'If I were bounded in a nutshell,
I would think myself a king
of infinite space;
were it not that I have bad dreams.\'

xxx

August 12th, 2021 01:46

Fear \"Them\"
orchidee said:

Good write Nikita.
\'They\' are often anonymous, or faceless, maybe just groups of people we may associate with certain various things.

August 7th, 2021 02:00

My Real Mirage
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Nikita, I feel the same now my wife is looking down on me from her star.

Welcome to MPS.

August 6th, 2021 00:21

My Real Mirage
Freni Karaluthara said:

beautifully penned poem.

August 5th, 2021 15:06

My Real Mirage
asmita said:

Awesome

August 5th, 2021 11:24