Comments received on poems by cosmacpan
think of me as you would think of yourself ...
L. B. Mek said:
there is nothing more underestimated, than \'simplicity\'
it takes a lot of work, to make anything in existence
appear, to be simple
just look at the stars, how fast they\'re travelling to maintain that perfect distance, so we can \'simply\' look-up and appreciate their beauty..
(I wish you the best, its a hard path you\'ve chosen to traverse)
maybe, you mean easy?
if so, then what you want to do is comply to popular opinion,
do what everyone does, that\'s the easy path;
going it alone? doing it your own way, staying true to yourself, becoming truly independent: that\'s bravery, the furthest thing from simplicity!
yeah! the universe is a fan of irony, lol
October 18th, 2021 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
there is nothing more underestimated, than \'simplicity\'
it takes a lot of work, to make anything in existence
appear, to be simple
just look at the stars, how fast they\'re travelling to maintain that perfect distance, so we can \'simply\' look-up and appreciate their beauty..
(I wish you the best, its a hard path you\'ve chosen to traverse)
maybe, you mean easy?
if so, then what you want to do is comply to popular opinion,
do what everyone does, that\'s the easy path;
going it alone? doing it your own way, staying true to yourself, becoming truly independent: that\'s bravery, the furthest thing from simplicity!
yeah! the universe is a fan of irony, lol
October 18th, 2021 05:04
Song for emoticon
L. B. Mek said:
\'How much you *belong to me\'..
this concept is a little archaic and unhealthy, generally..
but I appreciated the passionate imagery of your poetic voice,
thanks for sharing
September 9th, 2021 04:31
L. B. Mek said:
\'How much you *belong to me\'..
this concept is a little archaic and unhealthy, generally..
but I appreciated the passionate imagery of your poetic voice,
thanks for sharing
September 9th, 2021 04:31
now and here
Lorna said:
In the here and now I\'ve been told is the secret of life! You have expressed it so well.
August 20th, 2021 07:58
Lorna said:
In the here and now I\'ve been told is the secret of life! You have expressed it so well.
August 20th, 2021 07:58
the glass cages
cosmacpan said:
Thanks L.B.Mek. the word! what a delicate flower. perhaps the meanings, hidden or shown, bring light and understanding. anyway, everyone is looking for ... darkness even in clear spring water
August 17th, 2021 08:08
cosmacpan said:
Thanks L.B.Mek. the word! what a delicate flower. perhaps the meanings, hidden or shown, bring light and understanding. anyway, everyone is looking for ... darkness even in clear spring water
August 17th, 2021 08:08
the glass cages
L. B. Mek said:
some just have an agenda on their minds
and so it warps their views on everything..
sadly not much we can do
but ignore or tolerate them..
personally I think you shared an invigorating read
conveying positivity at its well meaning best,
thank you for choosing to share
August 17th, 2021 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
some just have an agenda on their minds
and so it warps their views on everything..
sadly not much we can do
but ignore or tolerate them..
personally I think you shared an invigorating read
conveying positivity at its well meaning best,
thank you for choosing to share
August 17th, 2021 04:10
the glass cages
cosmacpan said:
Hi Dusk,
I am not one of the \"all people of the president\", but always it has been, it is and it will be an president on this world. the domino pieces are lined up without knowing what might be next... movement...Thank you for passing and reading.
August 17th, 2021 00:50
cosmacpan said:
Hi Dusk,
I am not one of the \"all people of the president\", but always it has been, it is and it will be an president on this world. the domino pieces are lined up without knowing what might be next... movement...Thank you for passing and reading.
August 17th, 2021 00:50
the glass cages
dusk arising said:
As big a lie as \'up there someone knows everything?\' Because someone convinced u theres someone up there by using FEAR against you if you doubt it when you were a child. Time to use your reasoning and realise thats just a bag of worms they used to get away with in the middle ages when most were uneducated, unaware nerds, which I\'m guessing you are not.
Unshackle yourself.
August 16th, 2021 19:35
dusk arising said:
As big a lie as \'up there someone knows everything?\' Because someone convinced u theres someone up there by using FEAR against you if you doubt it when you were a child. Time to use your reasoning and realise thats just a bag of worms they used to get away with in the middle ages when most were uneducated, unaware nerds, which I\'m guessing you are not.
Unshackle yourself.
August 16th, 2021 19:35
It\'s autumn again
The elder poet said:
Awesome poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. Thanks for sharing it.
August 11th, 2021 17:12
The elder poet said:
Awesome poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. Thanks for sharing it.
August 11th, 2021 17:12
It\'s autumn again
Arvy said:
Wow Cosmacpan! \"and here is the long road waiting for me\" Amazingly expressing how I\'m feeling atm. Thank you for sharing!
August 11th, 2021 03:14
Arvy said:
Wow Cosmacpan! \"and here is the long road waiting for me\" Amazingly expressing how I\'m feeling atm. Thank you for sharing!
August 11th, 2021 03:14
violet
L. B. Mek said:
\'violet. it\'s the color that dresses me.
it protects me from love, from forgiveness\'..
(and maybe, after continuous exposure
we get addicted to the feel
of those purpled bruises, that yellow slowly
knowing, our early revival
only entice: much more pain, in the end)
I laud the unflinching bravery, in this write
whether fictional or testimony
impactful, to say the least!
thanks for choosing to share, dear poet
August 10th, 2021 04:47
L. B. Mek said:
\'violet. it\'s the color that dresses me.
it protects me from love, from forgiveness\'..
(and maybe, after continuous exposure
we get addicted to the feel
of those purpled bruises, that yellow slowly
knowing, our early revival
only entice: much more pain, in the end)
I laud the unflinching bravery, in this write
whether fictional or testimony
impactful, to say the least!
thanks for choosing to share, dear poet
August 10th, 2021 04:47
how to be a man. a real one
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great poem 🙂
August 9th, 2021 14:30
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great poem 🙂
August 9th, 2021 14:30
violet
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very expressive . Very creative with your words .
August 9th, 2021 14:29
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very expressive . Very creative with your words .
August 9th, 2021 14:29
how to be a man. a real one
HannahElisabeth said:
Preach this from the rooftops please. I love this
August 8th, 2021 21:45
HannahElisabeth said:
Preach this from the rooftops please. I love this
August 8th, 2021 21:45
how to be a man. a real one
Goddess of the Mist said:
Love it. It\'s all in the smallest of details (\"power of a flower\"), and there for those who take the time to pay attention.
August 8th, 2021 21:31
Goddess of the Mist said:
Love it. It\'s all in the smallest of details (\"power of a flower\"), and there for those who take the time to pay attention.
August 8th, 2021 21:31
how to be a man. a real one
Accidental Poet said:
Love the metaphor here cosmacpan. And so very true. 😉
August 8th, 2021 19:48
Accidental Poet said:
Love the metaphor here cosmacpan. And so very true. 😉
August 8th, 2021 19:48
nothing else to say
Goddess of the Mist said:
Oh wow, is it the grim reaper come to take her away? I like the dialogue going on here...
August 7th, 2021 21:34
Goddess of the Mist said:
Oh wow, is it the grim reaper come to take her away? I like the dialogue going on here...
August 7th, 2021 21:34
