Comments received on poems by Jay-Lee Jane
A Pair of Men
Doggerel Dave said:
Great structure to the poem and clear descriptions of the two characters I find interesting. So what was their problem?
Welcome to MPS You seem already keen to engage and comment on what you find here, so no need to ask you to. Good luck.
August 24th, 2021 19:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Great structure to the poem and clear descriptions of the two characters I find interesting. So what was their problem?
Welcome to MPS You seem already keen to engage and comment on what you find here, so no need to ask you to. Good luck.
August 24th, 2021 19:19
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