Comments received on poems by Aliyah Ib

M.E.M. said:

IDK if your purposefully left the first “can’t” and “leave” lowercase or why you capitalized “It” (s5, l3) but it’s make it interesting. I also love your use of rhyme. Im not a rhyming person, so when I see it used in unique and not generic ways like you did, I really like it.

January 4th, 2022 00:18

L. B. Mek said:

a powerful, poetic voice
I see you\'ve been writing for a while
look forward to reading your work
thanks for choosing to share

September 3rd, 2021 05:26

iAli said:

Great writing as a first publication in MPS.😊

The last stanza I like most ❣
\"The future is clear
And that is well said
Written in history
From unsolved mystery
Of who I will be
And the world will turn to see\"

Thanks for sharing 😊

September 3rd, 2021 03:52