Comments received on poems by The Anonymous Poet
Betrayal
L. B. Mek said:
\'in a blink
we intrust our hopeful hearts,
believing
in their professed loyalties\'
\'in a step
they\'ll shatter them, claiming
we were never enough: from the start\'..
(thanks for sharing,
this was short and succinct
and as dramatic as, some
may think, your wording is
its actually very realistic,
in my humble opinion)
September 21st, 2021 04:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'in a blink
we intrust our hopeful hearts,
believing
in their professed loyalties\'
\'in a step
they\'ll shatter them, claiming
we were never enough: from the start\'..
(thanks for sharing,
this was short and succinct
and as dramatic as, some
may think, your wording is
its actually very realistic,
in my humble opinion)
September 21st, 2021 04:56
Her
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words TAP. One day the right one will be there for you.
Andy
September 19th, 2021 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words TAP. One day the right one will be there for you.
Andy
September 19th, 2021 00:28
Her
dusk arising said:
Love is a two-way entity. One-way it is only desire or infatuation.
September 18th, 2021 09:14
dusk arising said:
Love is a two-way entity. One-way it is only desire or infatuation.
September 18th, 2021 09:14
Meant to be?
dusk arising said:
Romantic love is prescious beautiful but often cruel way to learn about love. But there is more, far more to love than romantic love.
Your poem reads like an early lesson from love, well written.
September 17th, 2021 14:34
dusk arising said:
Romantic love is prescious beautiful but often cruel way to learn about love. But there is more, far more to love than romantic love.
Your poem reads like an early lesson from love, well written.
September 17th, 2021 14:34
Meant to be?
Langton said:
I have been there as most people have at sometime. Hope another someone happens for you.
I like the honesty and integrity of the piece. More please.
September 17th, 2021 07:10
Langton said:
I have been there as most people have at sometime. Hope another someone happens for you.
I like the honesty and integrity of the piece. More please.
September 17th, 2021 07:10
His Girl
L. B. Mek said:
why is it exes always end-up with someone better
well, until you hear their relationship is over,
then you go back and check out those same gram\'s that made you hover
and you realise, nah
she/he wasn\'t all that
a bit of make-up or sit-up\'s and you too, could look like that... lol
(forgive me, just read your words and wanted to introduce a humorous perspective to it all)
thanks for sharing
September 17th, 2021 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
why is it exes always end-up with someone better
well, until you hear their relationship is over,
then you go back and check out those same gram\'s that made you hover
and you realise, nah
she/he wasn\'t all that
a bit of make-up or sit-up\'s and you too, could look like that... lol
(forgive me, just read your words and wanted to introduce a humorous perspective to it all)
thanks for sharing
September 17th, 2021 04:30
