Comments received on poems by figuring-it-all-out



Bucket List
Doggerel Dave said:

Nothing wrong in being a dreamer, and I cannot see anyone do anything but endorse your ambition. However I do hope a Greater Power ensures you are bought inside at night. Where I live domestic cats account for the loss of masses of small innocent marsupials, while rats, an introduced species, continue their activities…

Another great little rhymer from you – thanks.


October 7th, 2021 06:38

Bucket List
L. B. Mek said:

really creative, and has significant depth
a wonderfully intriguing read, thanks for sharing

October 7th, 2021 05:18

Prayer to a New Sun
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Very lovely feel to this poem . Good poem 🙂

October 5th, 2021 10:30

Prayer to a New Sun
rebmasters said:

Beautiful first stanza & warm & glorious throughout x

October 5th, 2021 10:18

Cobweb House
L. B. Mek said:

a clever poem, and a great read
thanks for sharing

October 5th, 2021 05:24

Cobweb House
Doggerel Dave said:

Not too sure about all the weird content, but I\'m a sucker for a decent rhymer....

Welcome to MPS and keep \'em coming.

October 5th, 2021 01:20

Cobweb House
IamUnicorn said:

I absolutely love this! I wish I could be so creative. 🥰

October 4th, 2021 15:32