Comments received on poems by turbo1904
IF I COULD GO BACK
Osei Zion said:
If I could go back, I wouldn\'t say that. I would focus. I really enjoyed this poem. Thanks.
September 17th, 2022 08:54
Osei Zion said:
If I could go back, I wouldn\'t say that. I would focus. I really enjoyed this poem. Thanks.
September 17th, 2022 08:54
IF I COULD GO BACK
jenny.g said:
Brilliant write! My ‘if I could go backs’ shape and guide me going forwards. And yes always give longer hugs
September 17th, 2022 08:33
jenny.g said:
Brilliant write! My ‘if I could go backs’ shape and guide me going forwards. And yes always give longer hugs
September 17th, 2022 08:33
IF I COULD GO BACK
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Turbo104. Many feel like that , but when I look back I see life differently as in my poem \"As I Look Back\".
Life is wonderful.
Andy
September 17th, 2022 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Turbo104. Many feel like that , but when I look back I see life differently as in my poem \"As I Look Back\".
Life is wonderful.
Andy
September 17th, 2022 00:24
THE WHITE MAN
evenwheniLie said:
Very good poem, but many of us have generations of mental condition not to defecate on our one time masters floor, something we need to do.. generational conditioning can be hard to break.. often times people don’t realize they’ve been conditioned.
June 22nd, 2022 20:58
evenwheniLie said:
Very good poem, but many of us have generations of mental condition not to defecate on our one time masters floor, something we need to do.. generational conditioning can be hard to break.. often times people don’t realize they’ve been conditioned.
June 22nd, 2022 20:58
DON\'T SWEAT THE SMALL STUFF
L. B. Mek said:
so true and the dispirited tone
so relatable, thanks for sharing
May 30th, 2022 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
so true and the dispirited tone
so relatable, thanks for sharing
May 30th, 2022 05:25
HAPPINESS IS
turbo1904 said:
Thank you! Never be sorry for being dramatic. Yes, you nailed it. Glad it had an impact on you. Thanks again.
May 24th, 2022 15:32
turbo1904 said:
Thank you! Never be sorry for being dramatic. Yes, you nailed it. Glad it had an impact on you. Thanks again.
May 24th, 2022 15:32
HAPPINESS IS
JudyStella said:
Such a wholesome poem! HAPPINESS IS
Being kind.
A state of Mind.
Loved these lines!
May 24th, 2022 10:22
JudyStella said:
Such a wholesome poem! HAPPINESS IS
Being kind.
A state of Mind.
Loved these lines!
May 24th, 2022 10:22
HAPPINESS IS
L. B. Mek said:
\'HAPPINESS IS
The kids next door.
Wiping out an old Score.\'
(if I\'m interpreting these lines
with the same depth
you inked them
then they, may be some
of the most important, I
have ever read!..
sorry to be dramatic)
thanks for sharing
May 24th, 2022 06:52
L. B. Mek said:
\'HAPPINESS IS
The kids next door.
Wiping out an old Score.\'
(if I\'m interpreting these lines
with the same depth
you inked them
then they, may be some
of the most important, I
have ever read!..
sorry to be dramatic)
thanks for sharing
May 24th, 2022 06:52
POINT OF VIEW
Vaughn Walker said:
Brings the feeling of hope. Very relatable to me.
May 21st, 2022 08:19
Vaughn Walker said:
Brings the feeling of hope. Very relatable to me.
May 21st, 2022 08:19
POINT OF VIEW
Rozina said:
This is an excellent poem with a very good message for us to remember.
May 21st, 2022 05:31
Rozina said:
This is an excellent poem with a very good message for us to remember.
May 21st, 2022 05:31
POINT OF VIEW
tallisman said:
I see a poem, you see it too, I see a poet, that poet is you! And a really good one too!
May 21st, 2022 05:18
tallisman said:
I see a poem, you see it too, I see a poet, that poet is you! And a really good one too!
May 21st, 2022 05:18
BURN UNIT
Rozina said:
I hope you are better now. Recovery takes much time and courage. Yes, those units are very special.
May 12th, 2022 17:58
Rozina said:
I hope you are better now. Recovery takes much time and courage. Yes, those units are very special.
May 12th, 2022 17:58
A SIGHT TO BEHOLD
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderfully rhythmic dedication
thanks for sharing
February 28th, 2022 07:00
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderfully rhythmic dedication
thanks for sharing
February 28th, 2022 07:00
A DANGEROUS THING
Buzz Bray said:
You should be reciting this in a smoky club backed up by a jazz trio. Strong imagery. Good read. Evokes a lot of emotions.
January 11th, 2022 22:53
Buzz Bray said:
You should be reciting this in a smoky club backed up by a jazz trio. Strong imagery. Good read. Evokes a lot of emotions.
January 11th, 2022 22:53
TENDER LOVE AND CARE
Paul Bell said:
It only takes a bill for some to slip into problems. Energy prices going sky-high in this self-sufficient country of ours. The public are getting ripped off, and this pathetic government ain\'t helping.
January 5th, 2022 13:36
Paul Bell said:
It only takes a bill for some to slip into problems. Energy prices going sky-high in this self-sufficient country of ours. The public are getting ripped off, and this pathetic government ain\'t helping.
January 5th, 2022 13:36
THE POWER OF ADDICTION
dusk arising said:
For me the cute rhyming was making light of the serious subject. There\'s much being said in your lines. Making rhymes restricts our use of vocabulary/depth.
It\'s just my personal take on rhyming poetry. Drug addiction is a deep dirty pit.
January 2nd, 2022 09:42
dusk arising said:
For me the cute rhyming was making light of the serious subject. There\'s much being said in your lines. Making rhymes restricts our use of vocabulary/depth.
It\'s just my personal take on rhyming poetry. Drug addiction is a deep dirty pit.
January 2nd, 2022 09:42
THE LADY IN WHITE
Paul Bell said:
Many a person would agree with you, and many more are still living with it.
Always think, only ex addicts can help addicts, and that\'s because you can\'t lie to them.
December 31st, 2021 10:56
Paul Bell said:
Many a person would agree with you, and many more are still living with it.
Always think, only ex addicts can help addicts, and that\'s because you can\'t lie to them.
December 31st, 2021 10:56
CAN YOU
Rozina said:
Some will be more difficult than others but will try. Very good points.
December 25th, 2021 03:51
Rozina said:
Some will be more difficult than others but will try. Very good points.
December 25th, 2021 03:51
BIGGER THAN YOU
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of any theological alignment
I still celebrate the positivity
and humanitarian goodwill, imbued
into this wonderfully comforting write
thanks for sharing
and Happy holidays, dear poet
December 24th, 2021 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of any theological alignment
I still celebrate the positivity
and humanitarian goodwill, imbued
into this wonderfully comforting write
thanks for sharing
and Happy holidays, dear poet
December 24th, 2021 06:16
A VIRUS
Rozina said:
Thank you for this reminder. Yes I absolutely agree with you.
December 23rd, 2021 01:13
Rozina said:
Thank you for this reminder. Yes I absolutely agree with you.
December 23rd, 2021 01:13
QUEER
L. B. Mek said:
a powerful write!
good for you, I laud your bravery
and yes, struggle continues
one convinced mind, at a time
but there is an end in sight
justice will prevail, equality
in no mere pipe dream
its a rainbow path, we\'re all
marching upon...
thanks for choosing to share
December 21st, 2021 05:07
L. B. Mek said:
a powerful write!
good for you, I laud your bravery
and yes, struggle continues
one convinced mind, at a time
but there is an end in sight
justice will prevail, equality
in no mere pipe dream
its a rainbow path, we\'re all
marching upon...
thanks for choosing to share
December 21st, 2021 05:07
