Comments received on poems by Casper_the_ghost
anxiety
L. B. Mek said:
despite its sobering topic
and somewhat, downbeat tone
I found this to be an enjoyable read..
a wonderfully expressive portrayal
of the frustrations and anxieties
we all have to deal with
at some point in our lives..
wonderfully worded, thanks for sharing
January 14th, 2022 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
despite its sobering topic
and somewhat, downbeat tone
I found this to be an enjoyable read..
a wonderfully expressive portrayal
of the frustrations and anxieties
we all have to deal with
at some point in our lives..
wonderfully worded, thanks for sharing
January 14th, 2022 04:12
routine
Paul Bell said:
Brings me back to my bus journey years ago. Every stop was like a roll call of people getting on, getting off, and dying in the process.
October 26th, 2021 12:12
Paul Bell said:
Brings me back to my bus journey years ago. Every stop was like a roll call of people getting on, getting off, and dying in the process.
October 26th, 2021 12:12
eden
dusk arising said:
Cupid\'s poisoned arrow. The overwhelming desire of love condemning the brain to malfunctions override..... until... realisation.... oh snake.
October 23rd, 2021 12:26
dusk arising said:
Cupid\'s poisoned arrow. The overwhelming desire of love condemning the brain to malfunctions override..... until... realisation.... oh snake.
October 23rd, 2021 12:26
eden
Paul Bell said:
Always notice the apple and the death reference associated with it. ( So healthy as well.) Always say the beautiful will kill you, surely be your downfall.
October 23rd, 2021 08:53
Paul Bell said:
Always notice the apple and the death reference associated with it. ( So healthy as well.) Always say the beautiful will kill you, surely be your downfall.
October 23rd, 2021 08:53
princess
Paul Bell said:
I think parents like square pegs in square holes, so when the square peg doesn\'t go into the round hole, it confuses them. Give them time.
October 22nd, 2021 11:08
Paul Bell said:
I think parents like square pegs in square holes, so when the square peg doesn\'t go into the round hole, it confuses them. Give them time.
October 22nd, 2021 11:08
princess
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sad writing . Difficult to feel like we wouldn’t be accepted by our families when we should be
October 22nd, 2021 09:45
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sad writing . Difficult to feel like we wouldn’t be accepted by our families when we should be
October 22nd, 2021 09:45
unrest
L. B. Mek said:
(a wonderful write, thanks for sharing and inspiring my little scribbled reply)
Greeks gave us hypnos,
Romans, gave us Insomnia
and we cleaned up their mess, with our little coloured pill...
and they say progressing
on a broken road, will lead you
to your downfall?
ha!
how would we know, we got pills baby
we got pills, and cartoons with flying carpets...
who needs, peace and serenity?
we\'ve just got to find that pill,
that will have us flying in our beds,
then all, will be just dreamy surreal
October 21st, 2021 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
(a wonderful write, thanks for sharing and inspiring my little scribbled reply)
Greeks gave us hypnos,
Romans, gave us Insomnia
and we cleaned up their mess, with our little coloured pill...
and they say progressing
on a broken road, will lead you
to your downfall?
ha!
how would we know, we got pills baby
we got pills, and cartoons with flying carpets...
who needs, peace and serenity?
we\'ve just got to find that pill,
that will have us flying in our beds,
then all, will be just dreamy surreal
October 21st, 2021 05:35
discoveries
jark said:
love is such a famous poetic prompt, i like the introspective nature of a poem written about love alone. Love is me trying to fix myself, if I can help you fix yourself too, that means i love you. Loved it alot.
October 20th, 2021 21:22
jark said:
love is such a famous poetic prompt, i like the introspective nature of a poem written about love alone. Love is me trying to fix myself, if I can help you fix yourself too, that means i love you. Loved it alot.
October 20th, 2021 21:22
