Comments received on poems by sketchy_soul



Temporary Feels
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful, both poem and song
thanks for sharing
(wish the camera person wasn\'t trying too much though
almost needed to take my sea sickness pills,
just to finish the video...
lol
\'I joke, I joke\'
I truly meant no disrespect)

January 21st, 2022 06:41

Glasses You
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
(but, we still need
to be wary of those splinters
that entrenched themselves
too deep
in those bruises, that are yet
to heal)
thanks for sharing, such a relatable and comforting read

November 5th, 2021 03:41

Glasses You
Charles_newOwner said:

Read the notes first, and I found your description of craking to really hit the mood as a whole! And don\'t get me started on the use of building yourself up! so symbolic and descriptive that it touches me in my recent events! keep it up!

November 5th, 2021 00:42

Caged Illusions
dusk arising said:

I read your author\'s comments first and then the poem. Having lived through this scenario a couple or more times I know just where you\'re coming from in your verse.
A well described helpless situation where u have scant control over what\'s happening.

November 2nd, 2021 12:42

Caged Illusions
MDStone said:

Speaks to the feelings, to the way the mind works or plays tricks. Love the powerful feeling and word art.

November 2nd, 2021 11:09

Caged Illusions
Mermaid said:

Superb brevity that says so much.
Love:
\"...Caged myself in this illusion of mine,...\"
Thought provoking work.

November 2nd, 2021 10:36