Comments received on poems by EthanMac
I\'m only young
spilleronsheet said:
Your only young but with so much deep insights
Your only young but such good control upon the words you say
Admire your creativity
Well crafted dear poet
It’s true a poet isn’t determined by age
Good going
Keep sharing
December 14th, 2021 14:10
spilleronsheet said:
Your only young but with so much deep insights
Your only young but such good control upon the words you say
Admire your creativity
Well crafted dear poet
It’s true a poet isn’t determined by age
Good going
Keep sharing
December 14th, 2021 14:10
The Tightrope
Paul Bell said:
Depression is the ultimate tightrope, one that comes on without any warning. There are some great medicines now, but real life practice is needed, and writing about it is one way to help yourself and others.
November 22nd, 2021 13:07
Paul Bell said:
Depression is the ultimate tightrope, one that comes on without any warning. There are some great medicines now, but real life practice is needed, and writing about it is one way to help yourself and others.
November 22nd, 2021 13:07
This Feeling
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A good expression . Sometimes our minds can feel so tired and so burdened . I have had mental health problems for a while , too … I know it can be difficult . Sorry that you feel this way . It doesn’t seem fair does it , when others are so very happy
November 16th, 2021 15:48
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A good expression . Sometimes our minds can feel so tired and so burdened . I have had mental health problems for a while , too … I know it can be difficult . Sorry that you feel this way . It doesn’t seem fair does it , when others are so very happy
November 16th, 2021 15:48
This Feeling
Paul Bell said:
This is a tough poem, and many will relate to it. Sometimes it just feels like the world is on your shoulders. There is lots of help now thankfully for depression, writing is definitely one of them. Hope the day gets better.
November 16th, 2021 11:20
Paul Bell said:
This is a tough poem, and many will relate to it. Sometimes it just feels like the world is on your shoulders. There is lots of help now thankfully for depression, writing is definitely one of them. Hope the day gets better.
November 16th, 2021 11:20
No one sees
L. B. Mek said:
I understand these feelings you\'re expressing, so bravely
but, the most important thing to remember
is that, it\'s not: his Fault!
instead, it\'s the the fault of those who were intrusted
with the opportunity, to teach him
how to Shine, and in so doing
allow everyone to see him, clearly..
but thankfully, its Never: too late
just like when theirs a power cut
and everything goes dark
we need only find
once candle - of hope
for us to find, the light in our lives
and so, he only needs to stay patient
until that first person, discovers him
then, the brightness
from his relieved heart, will insure
Everyone, will see him with ease...
(thanks for sharing, such a poignantly relatable write)
November 9th, 2021 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
I understand these feelings you\'re expressing, so bravely
but, the most important thing to remember
is that, it\'s not: his Fault!
instead, it\'s the the fault of those who were intrusted
with the opportunity, to teach him
how to Shine, and in so doing
allow everyone to see him, clearly..
but thankfully, its Never: too late
just like when theirs a power cut
and everything goes dark
we need only find
once candle - of hope
for us to find, the light in our lives
and so, he only needs to stay patient
until that first person, discovers him
then, the brightness
from his relieved heart, will insure
Everyone, will see him with ease...
(thanks for sharing, such a poignantly relatable write)
November 9th, 2021 04:34
No one sees
dusk arising said:
Because he does not show himself.
Many reasons why this should be mostly attributed to the way he was parented.
As one person who \'did not show himself\' I have slowly gained such strength here on MPS by sharing so much of myself in poetry over the years. There are many kind and understanding friendly poets here on MPS.
Great readable, relateable poetry.
November 8th, 2021 17:04
dusk arising said:
Because he does not show himself.
Many reasons why this should be mostly attributed to the way he was parented.
As one person who \'did not show himself\' I have slowly gained such strength here on MPS by sharing so much of myself in poetry over the years. There are many kind and understanding friendly poets here on MPS.
Great readable, relateable poetry.
November 8th, 2021 17:04
