Spirits
L. B. Mek said:

\'All the things you chose to hide,
The spirit\'s made them come alive,\'
a really good effort, expressed
such complexity in a relatable way
and I like your use of similes
throughout the write..
thanks for sharing, such a good read

December 9th, 2021 04:30

Snowfall
L. B. Mek said:

a poetic \'Snowflake\'
of owned accountability\'s
purposed Poetry
gleaned wisdom\'s maturity
of worded, Brilliance!
\'gnōthi seauton
know! thy self\'
(thanks for choosing to share)

November 15th, 2021 06:29

i wrote a poem
dusk arising said:

Writing our poetry is a self healing, rewarding thing. Do read other poets on here who are doing the self healing thing by expressing their feelings, thoughts and fears.

November 14th, 2021 08:42

i wrote a poem
Paul Bell said:

Yes, sometimes the words on the page convey all. Then we speak and spoil it all.

November 14th, 2021 07:45

The Brother Hood
Garth Rakumakoe said:

An honest friend giving honest good advice. A friend who would rather be honest and lose you than lie and keep you. Well penned.

November 10th, 2021 09:41