Comments received on poems by Angela-a
You Win
L. B. Mek said:
I adore the way, you\'ve weaved
a revealing glimpse
of love\'s complexities
in such a condensed write,
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
December 2nd, 2021 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
I adore the way, you\'ve weaved
a revealing glimpse
of love\'s complexities
in such a condensed write,
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
December 2nd, 2021 03:54
999
Paul Bell said:
This is very powerful.
Feels like the waiting is continuous and help is slow to come.
November 20th, 2021 05:08
Paul Bell said:
This is very powerful.
Feels like the waiting is continuous and help is slow to come.
November 20th, 2021 05:08
forgiveness is a scam
spilleronsheet said:
Beautifully penned dear poet
It’s very emotive
After being hurt, an apology can’t mend the ways
Once the heart is shattered, nothing can glue it again
November 19th, 2021 15:37
spilleronsheet said:
Beautifully penned dear poet
It’s very emotive
After being hurt, an apology can’t mend the ways
Once the heart is shattered, nothing can glue it again
November 19th, 2021 15:37
forgiveness is a scam
L. B. Mek said:
all is forgivable, until
that featherweight tape
of Trust
is fractured or broken
at which point
the ink of consequence, simply
taints - everything
and deems, it all
irreversibly unsalvageable..
(a relatable read, thanks for sharing)
November 19th, 2021 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
all is forgivable, until
that featherweight tape
of Trust
is fractured or broken
at which point
the ink of consequence, simply
taints - everything
and deems, it all
irreversibly unsalvageable..
(a relatable read, thanks for sharing)
November 19th, 2021 04:05
forgiveness is a scam
Doggerel Dave said:
Your poetry I like, feels neat and sophisticated.
However, this site works best for readers and poets alike when there is a response, some dialogue between the poet and those who have taken the trouble to comment on the work.
Otherwise - diminishing returns in terms of readership.
November 18th, 2021 19:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Your poetry I like, feels neat and sophisticated.
However, this site works best for readers and poets alike when there is a response, some dialogue between the poet and those who have taken the trouble to comment on the work.
Otherwise - diminishing returns in terms of readership.
November 18th, 2021 19:58
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L. B. Mek said:
realisation\'s: painful curse, of a waning
imagination;
a mourning for the loss
of what we, once
considered a limitless, part of ourselves...
(a great write! thanks for sharing)
\'There was a time when meadow, grove, and stream,
The earth, and every common sight,
To me did seem
Apparelled in celestial light,
The glory and the freshness of a dream.
It is not now as it hath been of yore;--
Turn wheresoe\'er I may,
By night or day,
The things which I have seen I now can see no more.\'
\'Whither is fled the visionary gleam?
Where is it now, the glory and the dream?\'
from \'Ode, Intimations of Immortality\'
by the great Wordsworth:
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-34653 )
a poem, he wrote decades before his death
but part of a collection, he insured
would only be published, posthumously - tellingly...\'
November 15th, 2021 07:34
L. B. Mek said:
realisation\'s: painful curse, of a waning
imagination;
a mourning for the loss
of what we, once
considered a limitless, part of ourselves...
(a great write! thanks for sharing)
\'There was a time when meadow, grove, and stream,
The earth, and every common sight,
To me did seem
Apparelled in celestial light,
The glory and the freshness of a dream.
It is not now as it hath been of yore;--
Turn wheresoe\'er I may,
By night or day,
The things which I have seen I now can see no more.\'
\'Whither is fled the visionary gleam?
Where is it now, the glory and the dream?\'
from \'Ode, Intimations of Immortality\'
by the great Wordsworth:
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-34653 )
a poem, he wrote decades before his death
but part of a collection, he insured
would only be published, posthumously - tellingly...\'
November 15th, 2021 07:34
unplug
spilleronsheet said:
Well penned dear poet
A rich imagery flows by the pen of yours
Awaiting your beautiful writes
November 13th, 2021 06:09
spilleronsheet said:
Well penned dear poet
A rich imagery flows by the pen of yours
Awaiting your beautiful writes
November 13th, 2021 06:09
unplug
Fay Slimm. said:
Am so glad I caught this example of fine poetic merit for which I send loud applause Angela - you capture with imagery a skillful talent to engage the reader - - this piece will go into my list of favourites and hoping to read more of your work.
November 13th, 2021 03:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Am so glad I caught this example of fine poetic merit for which I send loud applause Angela - you capture with imagery a skillful talent to engage the reader - - this piece will go into my list of favourites and hoping to read more of your work.
November 13th, 2021 03:17
unplug
Charles_newOwner said:
I think this is very deep, refreshing, while also reflecting; deserving a big appreciation in my book.
sometimes taking a break to refresh, reflect, and deepen yourself is what we all need to find the answers that we seek.
Most of the time, it feels like the answers are refreshing, is deep, and force you to reflect as you make it!
November 12th, 2021 22:26
Charles_newOwner said:
I think this is very deep, refreshing, while also reflecting; deserving a big appreciation in my book.
sometimes taking a break to refresh, reflect, and deepen yourself is what we all need to find the answers that we seek.
Most of the time, it feels like the answers are refreshing, is deep, and force you to reflect as you make it!
November 12th, 2021 22:26
what time is it?
L. B. Mek said:
really well written
reads like a timely \'wake-up call\' for society,
thanks for sharing
November 12th, 2021 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
really well written
reads like a timely \'wake-up call\' for society,
thanks for sharing
November 12th, 2021 04:51
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spilleronsheet said:
Excellent one dear poet
Wonderful painting of words
What a beautiful scene created in your words
November 11th, 2021 04:54
spilleronsheet said:
Excellent one dear poet
Wonderful painting of words
What a beautiful scene created in your words
November 11th, 2021 04:54
Don\'t look at me
Caring dove said:
Like this 🙂 we all need to feel grounded , to feel whole and connected . Maybe you are wanting to find your higher self , the true you .
Nice writing here )
November 9th, 2021 15:12
Caring dove said:
Like this 🙂 we all need to feel grounded , to feel whole and connected . Maybe you are wanting to find your higher self , the true you .
Nice writing here )
November 9th, 2021 15:12
Don\'t look at me
Paul Bell said:
I like this, we\'re all looking for that missing piece in life. The last line. Let me be. If you change, be, to know, makes it more powerful.
November 9th, 2021 15:04
Paul Bell said:
I like this, we\'re all looking for that missing piece in life. The last line. Let me be. If you change, be, to know, makes it more powerful.
November 9th, 2021 15:04
