Comments received on poems by Mahluli Dubase



Someone to Hold
L. B. Mek said:

good flow, really emotive
thanks for sharing

January 20th, 2022 07:57

May we meet again
L. B. Mek said:

Beautiful, reads like a Love hymn
and loved the final three lines,
a great dedication, full
of all the classic and easily relatable metaphors,
thanks for sharing


November 18th, 2021 03:59

May we meet again
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good lovelorn words Mahluli, I hope you do meet again.

Welcome to MPS.

November 18th, 2021 01:19