Comments received on poems by Ria
You started it.
L. B. Mek said:
many pariah\'s, exist
off-of the love, they trick
out - from the good natured, trusting
in the world,
legitimatising their mosquito
way of life
by blaming nature
for making it easy, to take advantage
of peoples kindness
forgetting, the lengthy karma Bill
they\'re accumulating..
(really well written
thanks for sharing,
and like your smile, said it best
\'Deuces: Fck it!
Good riddance\')
December 16th, 2021 05:07
L. B. Mek said:
many pariah\'s, exist
off-of the love, they trick
out - from the good natured, trusting
in the world,
legitimatising their mosquito
way of life
by blaming nature
for making it easy, to take advantage
of peoples kindness
forgetting, the lengthy karma Bill
they\'re accumulating..
(really well written
thanks for sharing,
and like your smile, said it best
\'Deuces: Fck it!
Good riddance\')
December 16th, 2021 05:07
Stolen Senses
Younique said:
I love it! especially the ending; \"Sweet aromas burn\" reminds me of a warn day home
December 14th, 2021 10:59
Younique said:
I love it! especially the ending; \"Sweet aromas burn\" reminds me of a warn day home
December 14th, 2021 10:59
I Saw You.
L. B. Mek said:
I can highlight so many lines
in this wonderfully immersive write,
a real poetic treat
thank you for choosing to share!
(why must our best art
be inspired
by our life\'s most crippling
of hurt\'s)
December 14th, 2021 03:55
L. B. Mek said:
I can highlight so many lines
in this wonderfully immersive write,
a real poetic treat
thank you for choosing to share!
(why must our best art
be inspired
by our life\'s most crippling
of hurt\'s)
December 14th, 2021 03:55