Comments received on poems by aOnceSoloExistence
Meditate or pray
L. B. Mek said:
the argument: against
and an explanation
for the rebuttal: for
all in one read..
thanks for sharing
February 22nd, 2022 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
the argument: against
and an explanation
for the rebuttal: for
all in one read..
thanks for sharing
February 22nd, 2022 04:44
Being in nature
Rocky Lagou said:
The end caught me so off guard 😅. Great job! This is really worth a lot! 👍
February 7th, 2022 13:28
Rocky Lagou said:
The end caught me so off guard 😅. Great job! This is really worth a lot! 👍
February 7th, 2022 13:28
That fateful night
Crystal Hope said:
it\'s crazy how life happens. It\'s like once they were there and now they are gone.
amazing share
January 23rd, 2022 17:17
Crystal Hope said:
it\'s crazy how life happens. It\'s like once they were there and now they are gone.
amazing share
January 23rd, 2022 17:17
I lost my friend
sophin said:
I am sorry for the pain you are feeling, I empathize well. The pain of losing someone such a way is always numbing. Be well, Once.
January 19th, 2022 00:54
sophin said:
I am sorry for the pain you are feeling, I empathize well. The pain of losing someone such a way is always numbing. Be well, Once.
January 19th, 2022 00:54
I lost my friend
Buzz Bray said:
Denial comes first, then the heart has to accept the hurt. But eventually, the heart finds the love it deserves and seeks. Nice read. Moving!
January 18th, 2022 21:49
Buzz Bray said:
Denial comes first, then the heart has to accept the hurt. But eventually, the heart finds the love it deserves and seeks. Nice read. Moving!
January 18th, 2022 21:49
If I am me
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, such an accessible wording
of the yearning we all, harbour for
somewhere within..
thanks for sharing
January 18th, 2022 06:11
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, such an accessible wording
of the yearning we all, harbour for
somewhere within..
thanks for sharing
January 18th, 2022 06:11
Hello stranger
L. B. Mek said:
hey there, like minded stranger
thanks for sharing
January 14th, 2022 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
hey there, like minded stranger
thanks for sharing
January 14th, 2022 05:37
Hello stranger
C E Thomas said:
Short yet poignant. Very well done, stranger!
January 13th, 2022 22:57
C E Thomas said:
Short yet poignant. Very well done, stranger!
January 13th, 2022 22:57
There’s a silence
L. B. Mek said:
intriguing concept, I like its conversational directness..
thanks for sharing
January 10th, 2022 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
intriguing concept, I like its conversational directness..
thanks for sharing
January 10th, 2022 05:37
Seems I need a cleaning
L. B. Mek said:
yes, Winter\'s New year
out with the old, in readiness
for that Spring cleaning of our lives
in the coming months
to open hopeful pathways, to those Summer
highlight\'s of life..
(for poetic purposes
kindly, choose
to ignore, there\'s usually
more than three season\'s in a year
forgive me, I\'m a lazy wannabe poet
so it took all I had
to make my elongated, metaphor
stretch to cover the three seasons...) lol
a great shorty, thanks for sharing
forgive me for having fun in your comments
I meant no disrespect, just
my roundabout way
of showing my appreciation
January 7th, 2022 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
yes, Winter\'s New year
out with the old, in readiness
for that Spring cleaning of our lives
in the coming months
to open hopeful pathways, to those Summer
highlight\'s of life..
(for poetic purposes
kindly, choose
to ignore, there\'s usually
more than three season\'s in a year
forgive me, I\'m a lazy wannabe poet
so it took all I had
to make my elongated, metaphor
stretch to cover the three seasons...) lol
a great shorty, thanks for sharing
forgive me for having fun in your comments
I meant no disrespect, just
my roundabout way
of showing my appreciation
January 7th, 2022 05:42
When thoughts are voiced
L. B. Mek said:
such a lovely flow
each stanza, a standalone
thought bubble
and each metaphor
blending into the other
like flour being kneaded
into a whole
that\'s refreshing and warm
as a slice
of just baked bread, or poetry..
both food
one for the belly
and that other, most necessary
of Artistry, for the mind!
(a great read,
thanks for sharing)
January 6th, 2022 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
such a lovely flow
each stanza, a standalone
thought bubble
and each metaphor
blending into the other
like flour being kneaded
into a whole
that\'s refreshing and warm
as a slice
of just baked bread, or poetry..
both food
one for the belly
and that other, most necessary
of Artistry, for the mind!
(a great read,
thanks for sharing)
January 6th, 2022 04:28
Not many, try and do
L. B. Mek said:
an intriguing read
with wonderful flow
thanks for sharing
and Happy New Year!
January 5th, 2022 04:48
L. B. Mek said:
an intriguing read
with wonderful flow
thanks for sharing
and Happy New Year!
January 5th, 2022 04:48
