Comments received on poems by MrDunnePoetry
\"V-Injury\"
sorenbarrett said:
I am 72 years old and just have become a rap fan. converted by Ren. I loved the theme of your verse andfelt the meter and rhyme.
June 1st, 2023 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
I am 72 years old and just have become a rap fan. converted by Ren. I loved the theme of your verse andfelt the meter and rhyme.
June 1st, 2023 05:43
Charles Bukowski (The Genius of the Crowd)
L. B. Mek said:
\'When a man is made average, then average he\'ll love/
And when the marriage ain\'t working, you\'ll find him in pub\'
what a fantastic reimagining
of Bukowski\'s, Classic
you\'re Awesome!
this is just so well done
thank you! for choosing to share
dear Poet
(since Bukowski\'s is one of my fav\'s
your poetry has genuinely made my day)
June 16th, 2022 02:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'When a man is made average, then average he\'ll love/
And when the marriage ain\'t working, you\'ll find him in pub\'
what a fantastic reimagining
of Bukowski\'s, Classic
you\'re Awesome!
this is just so well done
thank you! for choosing to share
dear Poet
(since Bukowski\'s is one of my fav\'s
your poetry has genuinely made my day)
June 16th, 2022 02:46
Like Wheat To Their Tare
L. B. Mek said:
(a great write, dear poet
thanks for sharing
and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
let\'s \'flip a coin\':
Pharaoh\'s with the worlds first slave trade
immortalised by timeless, Pyramids..
a Jewish generation, murdering a Christian
for blasphemy
and the world immortalising him, as a God..
a Genius named Einstein, credited
world wide
for creating an atomic bomb, he never worked on
immortalised, by his (E = mc2) t-shirts..
(we humans be a parody
of our parody: realities)
\'the most dangerous person
in the world
is the individual who reads
a single book
or adheres
to a single, perspective
and thinks, they
have all the answers
when
the rest of the world, generation
after wasted, generation
has yet to find, the right
questions...\'
being impassioned, is fine
being closed minded, is sad..
June 10th, 2022 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
(a great write, dear poet
thanks for sharing
and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
let\'s \'flip a coin\':
Pharaoh\'s with the worlds first slave trade
immortalised by timeless, Pyramids..
a Jewish generation, murdering a Christian
for blasphemy
and the world immortalising him, as a God..
a Genius named Einstein, credited
world wide
for creating an atomic bomb, he never worked on
immortalised, by his (E = mc2) t-shirts..
(we humans be a parody
of our parody: realities)
\'the most dangerous person
in the world
is the individual who reads
a single book
or adheres
to a single, perspective
and thinks, they
have all the answers
when
the rest of the world, generation
after wasted, generation
has yet to find, the right
questions...\'
being impassioned, is fine
being closed minded, is sad..
June 10th, 2022 04:26
Like Wheat To Their Tare
arqios said:
It\'s that ever elusive blaspheming, termed the unpardonable sin. A harbinger of a poem. Thanks for sharing.
June 9th, 2022 18:55
arqios said:
It\'s that ever elusive blaspheming, termed the unpardonable sin. A harbinger of a poem. Thanks for sharing.
June 9th, 2022 18:55
So Alone Verse
Charles Edward York said:
Great Poem Sir… and I wanted to wish you a happy birthday!
June 6th, 2022 01:46
Charles Edward York said:
Great Poem Sir… and I wanted to wish you a happy birthday!
June 6th, 2022 01:46
Life Is A Game (37 games/16 bars)
orchidee said:
We only had Tiddleywinks years ago!
February 20th, 2022 08:39
orchidee said:
We only had Tiddleywinks years ago!
February 20th, 2022 08:39
Haunted London
Rozina said:
Hope to go to London this year to be entertained by them. Thank you for this riveting information.
February 10th, 2022 23:35
Rozina said:
Hope to go to London this year to be entertained by them. Thank you for this riveting information.
February 10th, 2022 23:35
Mr Dunne Murders Poets For Fun
orchidee said:
Aww, he was only wandering lonely as a cloud. Why did ya take him the f.... out?! Doh! lol.
February 10th, 2022 10:30
orchidee said:
Aww, he was only wandering lonely as a cloud. Why did ya take him the f.... out?! Doh! lol.
February 10th, 2022 10:30
Haunted London
orchidee said:
I\'ll be too scared to visit London ever again! lol.
February 10th, 2022 10:28
orchidee said:
I\'ll be too scared to visit London ever again! lol.
February 10th, 2022 10:28
Moving On
Rocky Lagou said:
Man, you\'ve lived a hectic life by what I can infer from this poem. The way your poems were banned- wow. Something out of a move, for sure. Anyways, I\'m glad that you were able to pass by that phase in your life. Good job! 👍
February 8th, 2022 11:31
Rocky Lagou said:
Man, you\'ve lived a hectic life by what I can infer from this poem. The way your poems were banned- wow. Something out of a move, for sure. Anyways, I\'m glad that you were able to pass by that phase in your life. Good job! 👍
February 8th, 2022 11:31
Alcohol
Rozina said:
I\'m sorry you had to go through this. So glad you found peace and your words \'your ship will never sink\' are very positive indeed. All the best to you.
February 4th, 2022 23:16
Rozina said:
I\'m sorry you had to go through this. So glad you found peace and your words \'your ship will never sink\' are very positive indeed. All the best to you.
February 4th, 2022 23:16
Alcohol
Paul Bell said:
As much as drugs are the scourge, I would say alcohol is still the biggest killer of people. It certainly robs people of life, and as you say, also leaves scars on others.
February 4th, 2022 11:35
Paul Bell said:
As much as drugs are the scourge, I would say alcohol is still the biggest killer of people. It certainly robs people of life, and as you say, also leaves scars on others.
February 4th, 2022 11:35
Alcohol
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. Liquor gets a hold on people and its a difficult thing to put down. Well written. 👍
February 4th, 2022 11:20
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. Liquor gets a hold on people and its a difficult thing to put down. Well written. 👍
February 4th, 2022 11:20
The Evil They\'ve Created
Resa71 said:
Spot on to the happenings around the world at this time!
February 3rd, 2022 18:47
Resa71 said:
Spot on to the happenings around the world at this time!
February 3rd, 2022 18:47
Tupac Used To Rap For Me
Theangelwithabrokenwing said:
Tupac will forever be the Don. May he rest peacefully. Beautifully written poem.
January 11th, 2022 17:02
Theangelwithabrokenwing said:
Tupac will forever be the Don. May he rest peacefully. Beautifully written poem.
January 11th, 2022 17:02
Tupac Used To Rap For Me
L. B. Mek said:
Tupac! may he R.I.P
despite all of his, off career
faults
is still, my personal favourite
admittedly
an accused and jailed rapist, allegedly
so I can\'t boast my opinion
so ignorantly,
but his lyricism, delivery and voice
I could never falter
or find in other great\'s, such as Nas
or Talib Kweli...!
(thanks for sharing
and inspiring, these
\'off the dome\'
freestyle bars, as my
wannabe lyricist, reply
poetically) lol
January 11th, 2022 08:18
L. B. Mek said:
Tupac! may he R.I.P
despite all of his, off career
faults
is still, my personal favourite
admittedly
an accused and jailed rapist, allegedly
so I can\'t boast my opinion
so ignorantly,
but his lyricism, delivery and voice
I could never falter
or find in other great\'s, such as Nas
or Talib Kweli...!
(thanks for sharing
and inspiring, these
\'off the dome\'
freestyle bars, as my
wannabe lyricist, reply
poetically) lol
January 11th, 2022 08:18
Bars From Behind Bars
Rozina said:
Wow! A fantastic poem. You WILL get there. Good luck and best wishes.
January 8th, 2022 18:37
Rozina said:
Wow! A fantastic poem. You WILL get there. Good luck and best wishes.
January 8th, 2022 18:37
Bars From Behind Bars
orchidee said:
Good write MrD. Your first name Elusive? lol.
January 8th, 2022 06:54
orchidee said:
Good write MrD. Your first name Elusive? lol.
January 8th, 2022 06:54
Bael (Ars Goetia Demon #1)
L. B. Mek said:
now this, is my interpretation
of \'Purposed\' Artistry
may your blatant talent
finds its home
of appreciation, dear Poet
thank you! for choosing to share..
just laud the contextual detail
you manged to weave
into this riveting read
\'mere sample size\'
as it is, designed to be
January 7th, 2022 07:41
L. B. Mek said:
now this, is my interpretation
of \'Purposed\' Artistry
may your blatant talent
finds its home
of appreciation, dear Poet
thank you! for choosing to share..
just laud the contextual detail
you manged to weave
into this riveting read
\'mere sample size\'
as it is, designed to be
January 7th, 2022 07:41
Stay Down
Buzz Bray said:
Amazing!! You should be reciting this to a backbeat in a jazz club. Gives me goose bumps!
January 5th, 2022 11:52
Buzz Bray said:
Amazing!! You should be reciting this to a backbeat in a jazz club. Gives me goose bumps!
January 5th, 2022 11:52
Stay Down
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you just have to draw a line on the past, it\'s the future that counts.
January 5th, 2022 09:38
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you just have to draw a line on the past, it\'s the future that counts.
January 5th, 2022 09:38
Monstrous Inhumanity
Rozina said:
Monstrous inhumanity continues to occur. By humans to humans and animals and the planet.
January 4th, 2022 20:51
Rozina said:
Monstrous inhumanity continues to occur. By humans to humans and animals and the planet.
January 4th, 2022 20:51
Happy Home
Jannat said:
Thank you this is very deep and emotional that I can completely relate to. Going through pain can be really difficult but making pain your strength is a great achievement. Well done for not giving up and having a great willpower!
December 30th, 2021 14:31
Jannat said:
Thank you this is very deep and emotional that I can completely relate to. Going through pain can be really difficult but making pain your strength is a great achievement. Well done for not giving up and having a great willpower!
December 30th, 2021 14:31
Happy Home
Caring dove said:
It’s so important to feel worthy . I completely understand what it’s like to feel like a nobody and to feel worthless . It’s not nice at all . Makes you so happier to feel worthy and to love yourself ))
December 30th, 2021 14:22
Caring dove said:
It’s so important to feel worthy . I completely understand what it’s like to feel like a nobody and to feel worthless . It’s not nice at all . Makes you so happier to feel worthy and to love yourself ))
December 30th, 2021 14:22
