Comments received on poems by AntaraDwivedi
Friend
Bobby O said:
That is a friend. I enjoyed the read and Iām thinking it would be nice to know more.
May 10th, 2023 03:29
Bobby O said:
That is a friend. I enjoyed the read and Iām thinking it would be nice to know more.
May 10th, 2023 03:29
Just For Show
L. B. Mek said:
what an emotional rollercoaster of a read
great imagery as always
and I get this sense of journeying
through your very own creative process
as you deduce, from your own thoughts
and feelings, to choose the words
that will best portray, your state of mind
in this one crystallised poem
of a moment, in your life...
what a showcasing of your poetic skill, dear Poet
thank you! for choosing to share
April 5th, 2022 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
what an emotional rollercoaster of a read
great imagery as always
and I get this sense of journeying
through your very own creative process
as you deduce, from your own thoughts
and feelings, to choose the words
that will best portray, your state of mind
in this one crystallised poem
of a moment, in your life...
what a showcasing of your poetic skill, dear Poet
thank you! for choosing to share
April 5th, 2022 05:43
War
L. B. Mek said:
\'It\'s our passion, it\'s our pride
It\'s the charred gray tea-kettle lying on the bedside
after the world is quiet.\'
such distinct imagery..
I especially like the considered perspective, you showcase
see, from afar
we vilify all war, and yet
we use words like
\'I\'ll go to war for my family, readily...\'
(thanks for treating us to your poetic genius
and helping us celebrate World Poetry day, in style)
March 21st, 2022 07:31
L. B. Mek said:
\'It\'s our passion, it\'s our pride
It\'s the charred gray tea-kettle lying on the bedside
after the world is quiet.\'
such distinct imagery..
I especially like the considered perspective, you showcase
see, from afar
we vilify all war, and yet
we use words like
\'I\'ll go to war for my family, readily...\'
(thanks for treating us to your poetic genius
and helping us celebrate World Poetry day, in style)
March 21st, 2022 07:31
Don\'t you worry
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was so beautiful! I love the command you have with words and your diction is so enchanting. Kudos to you! āØš
February 18th, 2022 09:11
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was so beautiful! I love the command you have with words and your diction is so enchanting. Kudos to you! āØš
February 18th, 2022 09:11
Battle lore
spilleronsheet said:
Very eloquent
Well inked dear poet
Such is the love that keeps us bonded
February 3rd, 2022 14:33
spilleronsheet said:
Very eloquent
Well inked dear poet
Such is the love that keeps us bonded
February 3rd, 2022 14:33
Battle lore
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, \"if it\'s your altar my remains lie at\" is such a powerful line. It shows just how much this person is giving and giving to a point of yielding all that they are for the other.
February 3rd, 2022 10:51
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, \"if it\'s your altar my remains lie at\" is such a powerful line. It shows just how much this person is giving and giving to a point of yielding all that they are for the other.
February 3rd, 2022 10:51
Battle lore
L. B. Mek said:
\'Love, o you the elusive one, the troubled child who I could never get a hold of. Forgive me, forgive me for distrusting and deriding you.\'
\'Don\'t Iet these shallow breaths be in vain.\'
Amen!
beautiful worded, thanks for sharing dear Poet
February 3rd, 2022 08:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'Love, o you the elusive one, the troubled child who I could never get a hold of. Forgive me, forgive me for distrusting and deriding you.\'
\'Don\'t Iet these shallow breaths be in vain.\'
Amen!
beautiful worded, thanks for sharing dear Poet
February 3rd, 2022 08:48
A full stop
L. B. Mek said:
\'A full stop.
Tattooed on our backs
Gorging everything it lacks
Relentless questions, screaming facts
Yet on the heart\'s bullhorn it acts
Everytime we\'re struck by a painful blow.
Some call it cupid\'s arrow.\'
(because there are brilliant poets, like you
in this world
I shall ever continue to strive
for poetic, brilliance!
thank you for sharing, and letting us see
the progress you have made in your Poetry\'s journey, dear Poet)..
humbly, I read and learn
January 27th, 2022 06:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'A full stop.
Tattooed on our backs
Gorging everything it lacks
Relentless questions, screaming facts
Yet on the heart\'s bullhorn it acts
Everytime we\'re struck by a painful blow.
Some call it cupid\'s arrow.\'
(because there are brilliant poets, like you
in this world
I shall ever continue to strive
for poetic, brilliance!
thank you for sharing, and letting us see
the progress you have made in your Poetry\'s journey, dear Poet)..
humbly, I read and learn
January 27th, 2022 06:39
A Night Forgotten
L. B. Mek said:
\'Rooster shrieks atop a ledge, yellow breaking the night
This is where it all ends huh? Even all the rancour and might!\'
(you clearly have a wonderful poetic talent
thank you! for choosing to share it with us
dear poet)
January 10th, 2022 08:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'Rooster shrieks atop a ledge, yellow breaking the night
This is where it all ends huh? Even all the rancour and might!\'
(you clearly have a wonderful poetic talent
thank you! for choosing to share it with us
dear poet)
January 10th, 2022 08:30
What am I?
Paul Bell said:
I think at this time of year, the imaginary machine gun appears in your hand, and you let rip.
I always wondered why they called it the festive season. Everyone I\'ve spoken to is miserable, especially the guy next door, someone stole his Christmas tree.
December 31st, 2021 11:07
Paul Bell said:
I think at this time of year, the imaginary machine gun appears in your hand, and you let rip.
I always wondered why they called it the festive season. Everyone I\'ve spoken to is miserable, especially the guy next door, someone stole his Christmas tree.
December 31st, 2021 11:07
Rosemary sneaks into the garden
Caring dove said:
This is a lovely writing šš
December 30th, 2021 12:52
Caring dove said:
This is a lovely writing šš
December 30th, 2021 12:52
