Comments received on poems by 1ofMyPassions
F(free) E(each)A(altruistic) R(reality)
Crowns4Christ said:
Absolutely agree, we were meant to live as one whole,not with all of this hateful and racist world,it really hurts to be the only one in my family that isn\'t racist, that is one of the biggest things that really angers me,
You speak total truth, great piece
March 29th, 2022 14:21
Crowns4Christ said:
Absolutely agree, we were meant to live as one whole,not with all of this hateful and racist world,it really hurts to be the only one in my family that isn\'t racist, that is one of the biggest things that really angers me,
You speak total truth, great piece
March 29th, 2022 14:21
Love or Lust by Michelle Olds
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Simple and effective. Maybe one day, I can find someone to write about this way, i hope you found yours!
February 23rd, 2022 15:49
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Simple and effective. Maybe one day, I can find someone to write about this way, i hope you found yours!
February 23rd, 2022 15:49
Withdrawal by Michelle Olds
L. B. Mek said:
good read, reads so relatable
love the spacing
couldn\'t help being reminded of Shania twain\'s, \'honey I\'m home\'..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 11th, 2022 06:37
L. B. Mek said:
good read, reads so relatable
love the spacing
couldn\'t help being reminded of Shania twain\'s, \'honey I\'m home\'..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 11th, 2022 06:37
For Grandma with Love
L. B. Mek said:
such sincerity and tenderness
a beautiful dedication
thanks for sharing
(the song, \'grandma\'s hands\'
by bill withers
came to mind
when reading your words, dear poet)
February 10th, 2022 04:18
L. B. Mek said:
such sincerity and tenderness
a beautiful dedication
thanks for sharing
(the song, \'grandma\'s hands\'
by bill withers
came to mind
when reading your words, dear poet)
February 10th, 2022 04:18
Passion Pursuit by Michelle Olds
Alexander Pope III said:
Very measured and balanced use of feelings. Great
February 4th, 2022 21:52
Alexander Pope III said:
Very measured and balanced use of feelings. Great
February 4th, 2022 21:52
True Talk by Michelle Olds
Alexander Pope III said:
Lucky is the person for whom you wrote. Beautiful
February 4th, 2022 21:49
Alexander Pope III said:
Lucky is the person for whom you wrote. Beautiful
February 4th, 2022 21:49
Words by Michelle Olds
Rocky Lagou said:
Preach! Our posterity needs to be beneficially bolstered by our words today. 🙌
February 3rd, 2022 13:29
Rocky Lagou said:
Preach! Our posterity needs to be beneficially bolstered by our words today. 🙌
February 3rd, 2022 13:29
Letting Go by Michelle Olds
L. B. Mek said:
very true,
\'that illogical deafness
trait of our heart\'s, once its
tripped and fallen: hard\'..
thanks for sharing
February 1st, 2022 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
very true,
\'that illogical deafness
trait of our heart\'s, once its
tripped and fallen: hard\'..
thanks for sharing
February 1st, 2022 05:45
Passion Pursuit by Michelle Olds
L. B. Mek said:
can\'t help, but relate
the anguish you portray
to all the suffering
my eyes have \'glazed over\', during my life
and a part of my mind, has tried to forget
knowing, there\'s no rhyme or reason
to what fate deals us
some setbacks, so easy to identify
where as some, are hidden, deep
behind brave smiles and far too knowing, eyes..
(a great write!
I think you measured the emotional levels really well
in what must have been, a really tough write
to read back to yourself, from
an objective reader\'s perspective)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
January 31st, 2022 05:38
L. B. Mek said:
can\'t help, but relate
the anguish you portray
to all the suffering
my eyes have \'glazed over\', during my life
and a part of my mind, has tried to forget
knowing, there\'s no rhyme or reason
to what fate deals us
some setbacks, so easy to identify
where as some, are hidden, deep
behind brave smiles and far too knowing, eyes..
(a great write!
I think you measured the emotional levels really well
in what must have been, a really tough write
to read back to yourself, from
an objective reader\'s perspective)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
January 31st, 2022 05:38
Sounds like love by Michelle Olds
L. B. Mek said:
..and you picture it, too
so vividly
for us to imagine, and be
reminded
why we yearn to have it
visit us
time n again, as many times
it takes
till we too, can get it right...
(a worded serenade of love\'s
gently picturesque scenic qualities)
wonderful imagery
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 28th, 2022 05:08
L. B. Mek said:
..and you picture it, too
so vividly
for us to imagine, and be
reminded
why we yearn to have it
visit us
time n again, as many times
it takes
till we too, can get it right...
(a worded serenade of love\'s
gently picturesque scenic qualities)
wonderful imagery
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 28th, 2022 05:08
Sounds like love by Michelle Olds
Buzz Bray said:
Beautiful images. Pleasant read!
January 27th, 2022 21:16
Buzz Bray said:
Beautiful images. Pleasant read!
January 27th, 2022 21:16
Trust by Michelle Olds
L. B. Mek said:
wanted to highlight some penetratingly acute, lines
but couldn\'t find a line to, live out
of the whole write
just such a nurturing, inking
of life\'s \'hard earned\' wisdom,
and what a sincere wording
of simplicity\'s solace, dear Poet
loved the spine of the wholesome message
but was drawn, more
to the poetry of your flow and form
so enticingly paced to perfection
a great write!
(in my humble opinion)
thanks for sharing
January 25th, 2022 05:38
L. B. Mek said:
wanted to highlight some penetratingly acute, lines
but couldn\'t find a line to, live out
of the whole write
just such a nurturing, inking
of life\'s \'hard earned\' wisdom,
and what a sincere wording
of simplicity\'s solace, dear Poet
loved the spine of the wholesome message
but was drawn, more
to the poetry of your flow and form
so enticingly paced to perfection
a great write!
(in my humble opinion)
thanks for sharing
January 25th, 2022 05:38
Tenderness
L. B. Mek said:
that momentous, moment
of yearning
your words depict, is palpable;
a very relatable read..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 24th, 2022 06:46
L. B. Mek said:
that momentous, moment
of yearning
your words depict, is palpable;
a very relatable read..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 24th, 2022 06:46
Movin\\\\\\\' On by Michelle Olds
Daydream Believer said:
Love can force us through so much pain. Sad yet good write
January 21st, 2022 14:10
Daydream Believer said:
Love can force us through so much pain. Sad yet good write
January 21st, 2022 14:10
DOLLARS and SENSE by Michelle Olds
L. B. Mek said:
(please forgive my elongated reply below
your words inspired me and I couldn\'t halt the flow,
thank you for sharing
such relatable words)
we consume from morning to night
at whatever level we can afford
from penny sweets to lobster meals..
and so, we fail to realise
when it comes to relationships
and the people in our lives
there\'s no price tags, that can undo
some of our mistakes..
so best to think twice
before acting a fool, and throwing away
all that was once, a source of solace
and strength, in our lives...
in the words of Miss Beverley Knight
\'Now \" Shoulda woulda coulda, \" means I\'m out of time
\'Cause \"Shoulda woulda coulda\", can\'t change your mind
And I wonder, wonder, wonder what I\'m gonna do
\"Shoulda woulda coulda\" are the last words of a fool\'
January 20th, 2022 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
(please forgive my elongated reply below
your words inspired me and I couldn\'t halt the flow,
thank you for sharing
such relatable words)
we consume from morning to night
at whatever level we can afford
from penny sweets to lobster meals..
and so, we fail to realise
when it comes to relationships
and the people in our lives
there\'s no price tags, that can undo
some of our mistakes..
so best to think twice
before acting a fool, and throwing away
all that was once, a source of solace
and strength, in our lives...
in the words of Miss Beverley Knight
\'Now \" Shoulda woulda coulda, \" means I\'m out of time
\'Cause \"Shoulda woulda coulda\", can\'t change your mind
And I wonder, wonder, wonder what I\'m gonna do
\"Shoulda woulda coulda\" are the last words of a fool\'
January 20th, 2022 05:26
Becoming
Crystal Hope said:
This has an incredible ending that says a lot about ourselves.
brilliant writing
January 17th, 2022 18:00
Crystal Hope said:
This has an incredible ending that says a lot about ourselves.
brilliant writing
January 17th, 2022 18:00
Gotcha
Paul Bell said:
No pain, no gain.
Yes, that was so good, I will definitely be back for more, Oh, and more.
January 12th, 2022 14:21
Paul Bell said:
No pain, no gain.
Yes, that was so good, I will definitely be back for more, Oh, and more.
January 12th, 2022 14:21
Evolving Me
Buzz Bray said:
I can hear you roar! Defining yourself for yourself. Being as YOU wish. Congratulations!
January 10th, 2022 21:11
Buzz Bray said:
I can hear you roar! Defining yourself for yourself. Being as YOU wish. Congratulations!
January 10th, 2022 21:11
NO MORE by Michelle Olds
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'more power to you: sister!\'
January 10th, 2022 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'more power to you: sister!\'
January 10th, 2022 05:26
FIRE & DESIRE by Michelle Olds
A.D. Small said:
I love the fire inside of this poem. He was definitely checking you out lol. Good job.
January 10th, 2022 03:02
A.D. Small said:
I love the fire inside of this poem. He was definitely checking you out lol. Good job.
January 10th, 2022 03:02
Looking Glass
A.D. Small said:
Another great poem. I love the way you intertwine your words together so fluidly. Keep up the great work.
January 10th, 2022 03:00
A.D. Small said:
Another great poem. I love the way you intertwine your words together so fluidly. Keep up the great work.
January 10th, 2022 03:00
Love you.... Love You Not by Michelle Olds
A.D. Small said:
Very well written indeed. Thank you for sharing your beautiful words.
January 10th, 2022 02:58
A.D. Small said:
Very well written indeed. Thank you for sharing your beautiful words.
January 10th, 2022 02:58
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