Comments received on poems by uncertaintea
I am Heavy
Rocky Lagou said:
Ok, apart from me relating to the title of this poem on a physical level 😅 This was really good. The way sometimes we have to cut off relationships or even prevent them from beginning in order to save the other person from our mess is probably one of the most selfless things we can do. But we eventually have to grow and become worthy of our beings. Nice poem!
February 8th, 2022 13:27
Rocky Lagou said:
Ok, apart from me relating to the title of this poem on a physical level 😅 This was really good. The way sometimes we have to cut off relationships or even prevent them from beginning in order to save the other person from our mess is probably one of the most selfless things we can do. But we eventually have to grow and become worthy of our beings. Nice poem!
February 8th, 2022 13:27
I am Heavy
L. B. Mek said:
(this is a penetratingly succinct poem
\'in my humble opinion\'
thank you! for choosing to share
and for inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
Time divided by Life
always equates, to the gathering
of garbage
as unwanted, baggage
although
we reserve the right, to claim
that garbage or leave it
endlessly, going round
on that baggage carousal
every time, we\'re greeted
by a new relationship\'s
arrival Gates;
our choice, is a tool
we must never, squander...
January 7th, 2022 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
(this is a penetratingly succinct poem
\'in my humble opinion\'
thank you! for choosing to share
and for inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
Time divided by Life
always equates, to the gathering
of garbage
as unwanted, baggage
although
we reserve the right, to claim
that garbage or leave it
endlessly, going round
on that baggage carousal
every time, we\'re greeted
by a new relationship\'s
arrival Gates;
our choice, is a tool
we must never, squander...
January 7th, 2022 05:24
