Comments received on poems by Osei Zion



NEW YEAR\'S BLOOMING
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

December 31st, 2023 12:52

Christmas Gifts
orchidee said:

Good write O.

December 25th, 2022 03:08

I Run to Him
orchidee said:

A fine write O.

December 13th, 2022 14:46

Go Away
orchidee said:

There\'s a comedy film with a line: \'Go away? If you want me to go away, I will stay as long as you like!\' lol.

December 12th, 2022 12:19

Trust and Obey
orchidee said:

Good write O.

November 7th, 2022 02:54

I\'M STANDING
orchidee said:

Good write Osei.

October 9th, 2022 01:55

Gentle Peacock
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Osei.

August 27th, 2022 02:10

I\'D SEEN
Neville said:


a compelling introduction to your ink .. I am sure I shall visit more of it in time ..
I found this particular poem, most informative .. thank you for enlightening me .. I am a great fan of history ... kind regards, Neville


August 27th, 2022 00:46

More Of You
orchidee said:

Good write Osei.

August 25th, 2022 09:28

I Ask Myself...
orchidee said:

Good write Osei.

August 25th, 2022 01:51

AT YOUR SERVICE
jazzwa30 said:

good read

August 5th, 2022 08:23

LOST IN THE RAIN
Raven333 said:

Really enjoyed it, I love the rain. it was a nice write.

July 3rd, 2022 13:42

AT YOUR SERVICE
L. B. Mek said:

you forget, dear Poet
many more, \'of Us\'
are busy
pushing our neighbours
off-of life\'s ladder, just
to get one more step, closer
before we can start
being chosen for elevated
enslavement..
yeah, that\'s the herd majority
we represent
that\'s how much our mind\'s have been warped
we wage wars, child vs child
while those in power
get doctor\'s notes for their children
or have them placed in officer roles
like, safe at the back of the line
like royalty, that love displaying
their soldier uniforms
as-if, their existence is a service
for us...
yeah..
yeahhh, right? lol
well here\'s to your pristine uniforms
coming our of battles, as spotless
as they entered them
so you cam visit, veteran hospitals
like \'equals\'
yeah
yeahhh, right? lol
\'For it\'s Tommy this, an\' Tommy that, an\' \"Chuck him out, the brute!\"
But it\'s \"Saviour of \'is country\" when the guns begin to shoot;
An\' it\'s Tommy this, an\' Tommy that, an\' anything you please;
An\' Tommy ain\'t a bloomin\' fool -- you bet that Tommy sees!\'
from Kipling\'s \'Tommy\'
(
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-15386
)
and we\'re all just modern \'Tommy\'s\'
waiting for our turn, to be useful
that\'s how, warped
\'they\'ve\' devalued the worth of a
life
nihilism and atheism as their tools
enslaving us
with our very tools for self-emancipated
freedom...

June 21st, 2022 05:52

AT THE ROYAL PALACE
L. B. Mek said:

\'looking up\'
gives us a great target
but we never
want to imagine, how
looking
at either side of our shoulders
or that
refractory, image in the mirror
holds just, as much
accountability for forging
the world we live in..
easier
to be down here, pointing
up there
and then when time comes
have fun, run riot
let it all out
tare them all down
brick by brick
and guillotined head after
guillotined, children\'s head..
yup
worked so well, for the French!
lol
a fun read, thanks for sharing

May 5th, 2022 05:18

AT THE ROYAL PALACE
Saxon Crow said:

I shall refrain on my views of royalty

May 5th, 2022 01:08

CROWN THE COLONY
jarcher54 said:

Very evocative and intense. You have things to say! Thank you for this.

April 20th, 2022 00:45

\'IT IS FINISHED\'
orchidee said:

Good write Osei.

April 18th, 2022 08:52

\'IT IS FINISHED\'
Paul Bell said:

If ever a saviour was needed for the human race, it has got to be now.
We must be the most destructive species ever.

April 18th, 2022 06:11

\'IT IS FINISHED\'
Crowns4Christ said:

Absolutely beautiful Osai, He is risen indeed my friend, and His return is just on the horizon, even at the door,meet you in the sky my friend

April 15th, 2022 22:15

OUR GENES ONCE LIVED
Dahlia said:

well penned poet &
splendid closing lines
so sad to see history repeating itself as if past tragedies were meaningless
Dahlia

April 9th, 2022 11:55

YOU CRANE WALL?
dean langmuir said:

Nice write,take care,poet on

April 2nd, 2022 17:19

IN MY GENERATION
Lee Imuede said:

This is a beautiful poem that strikes old memories; when life was traditional yet sweet

March 30th, 2022 14:12

UIB
L. B. Mek said:

and exactly, what percent of the Indonesian population
can afford the total living costs of attending a university...?

how empathetically priced do you think those fees are?

and why does a learning establishment
need such high profit margins, do you think?

February 21st, 2022 06:11

ENOCH WAS BORN
sorenbarrett said:

Well done. A good adage let excellence remain your mark.

February 10th, 2022 13:50

ENOCH WAS BORN
L. B. Mek said:

happy birthday

February 1st, 2022 05:48

A REMINDER, O AFRICA
cofhypieces said:

keep getting better everyday

January 19th, 2022 00:21

I\'D SEEN
L. B. Mek said:

an informative write
crazy how the world
likes to depict, famine
as a phenomenon
maybe, one centred on those
parts of the world
with people who have
more colour to their skins, it isn\'t!
Never, can be
famine is a plague, that humanity
has been running from
since the beginning of Time..
It\'s just that now
we have bureaucratic idiocy
to give it
that much more opportunity
for causing the devastation
it mercilessly desires


January 13th, 2022 05:43

THAT TUNNEL
cofhypieces said:

Great poem !!!
Full of rhythm and thought, well crafted Zion

January 12th, 2022 09:46

GOAL
L. B. Mek said:

wise words
and some insightful commentary
on people\'s, general way of thinking
thanks for sharing

January 7th, 2022 05:51

GOAL
Rozina said:

Will keep trying to achieve goals whether as a person, as a worker, as a parent etc. A very good message.

January 7th, 2022 00:07