Comments received on poems by Tangowilliam
A Conker\'s Tale
Tangowilliam said:
Thank you. It\'s better with a picture! Must get some points.
October 28th, 2022 14:55
Tangowilliam said:
Thank you. It\'s better with a picture! Must get some points.
October 28th, 2022 14:55
A Conker\'s Tale
Tangowilliam said:
Thank you. It\'s better with a picture! Must get some points.
October 28th, 2022 12:13
Tangowilliam said:
Thank you. It\'s better with a picture! Must get some points.
October 28th, 2022 12:13
A Conker\'s Tale
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
personally, I find enough vivid imagery in your words
October 28th, 2022 06:25
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
personally, I find enough vivid imagery in your words
October 28th, 2022 06:25
A Conker\'s Tale
Tangowilliam said:
Thank you. It\'s better with a picture! Must get some points.
October 28th, 2022 06:07
Tangowilliam said:
Thank you. It\'s better with a picture! Must get some points.
October 28th, 2022 06:07
A Conker\'s Tale
Tangowilliam said:
Thank you. It\'s better with a picture! Must get some points.
October 28th, 2022 04:07
Tangowilliam said:
Thank you. It\'s better with a picture! Must get some points.
October 28th, 2022 04:07
A Conker\'s Tale
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Poor ‘ bonkers ‘ ( lol .. but great writing ! 🙂 I liked reading this
October 28th, 2022 03:43
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Poor ‘ bonkers ‘ ( lol .. but great writing ! 🙂 I liked reading this
October 28th, 2022 03:43
The Girl Inside
L. B. Mek said:
reading your sincere words
makes me want to suggest
\'break the Shell\' by India Arie
to you, thanks for sharing
(some lyrics from the song)
\'Courage is not being hard
It\'s time to peel back all of the layers
You put between who you\'re meant to be
And who you are
And go be: who you are
So much disappointment to finally understand
That there is no such thing as perfect
We\'re all simply doing the best that we can
And we have a choice to live
or to truly: be alive
This is your life
Child its time to break the shell
Life\'s gonna hurt but its meant to be felt
You cannot touch the sky from inside yourself
You cannot fly until it breaks the shell\'
March 21st, 2022 07:10
L. B. Mek said:
reading your sincere words
makes me want to suggest
\'break the Shell\' by India Arie
to you, thanks for sharing
(some lyrics from the song)
\'Courage is not being hard
It\'s time to peel back all of the layers
You put between who you\'re meant to be
And who you are
And go be: who you are
So much disappointment to finally understand
That there is no such thing as perfect
We\'re all simply doing the best that we can
And we have a choice to live
or to truly: be alive
This is your life
Child its time to break the shell
Life\'s gonna hurt but its meant to be felt
You cannot touch the sky from inside yourself
You cannot fly until it breaks the shell\'
March 21st, 2022 07:10
My Darling Lou
Rocky Lagou said:
I see this is a very sentimental work and I love the way you presented it. It\'s really intimate and it\'s enjoyable.
March 16th, 2022 08:45
Rocky Lagou said:
I see this is a very sentimental work and I love the way you presented it. It\'s really intimate and it\'s enjoyable.
March 16th, 2022 08:45
Tantrastic
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! This was an interlaced poem that was so profound. My personal interpretation on this poem is that moment in love that is essentially the zenith of the relationship. Where the TWO, become ONE. It\'s a romance that is so euphoric that the two lovers spiritually or in some metaphysical way, fuse together. It\'s an infatuation. And I feel like you cleverly, and suitably, expressed that when you intentionally used the pronouns \"we\" to describe feelings that is being experienced by the speaker of the poem only. So although the speaker may be the only one sensing and experiencing these \"breaths\" that are very prominent in the poem, it is continuously preceded by that joint word: \"we.\" I also want to note the line, \"if we could, if we could still time\" as I find it has a double meaning. It\'s almost impossible to read that line without having the word \"steal\" come up in your mind instead of \"still.\" So I feel like you can be expressing the feeling of wanting to stop time forever and live in this world of love forever, and that you also want to be able to take back time from the past. Very thought-provoking! Bravo! 👏
February 24th, 2022 10:08
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! This was an interlaced poem that was so profound. My personal interpretation on this poem is that moment in love that is essentially the zenith of the relationship. Where the TWO, become ONE. It\'s a romance that is so euphoric that the two lovers spiritually or in some metaphysical way, fuse together. It\'s an infatuation. And I feel like you cleverly, and suitably, expressed that when you intentionally used the pronouns \"we\" to describe feelings that is being experienced by the speaker of the poem only. So although the speaker may be the only one sensing and experiencing these \"breaths\" that are very prominent in the poem, it is continuously preceded by that joint word: \"we.\" I also want to note the line, \"if we could, if we could still time\" as I find it has a double meaning. It\'s almost impossible to read that line without having the word \"steal\" come up in your mind instead of \"still.\" So I feel like you can be expressing the feeling of wanting to stop time forever and live in this world of love forever, and that you also want to be able to take back time from the past. Very thought-provoking! Bravo! 👏
February 24th, 2022 10:08
Butterfly, butterfly
cancangill said:
Nice poem, I hope your butterfly stays with you 😊 ❤
January 22nd, 2022 04:23
cancangill said:
Nice poem, I hope your butterfly stays with you 😊 ❤
January 22nd, 2022 04:23
Stations
Tangowilliam said:
Yes, about soulmates or any friendship or partnership that has a beginning and an end. Could be through bereavement or other loss. It is also about leaving and arriving!
January 19th, 2022 08:41
Tangowilliam said:
Yes, about soulmates or any friendship or partnership that has a beginning and an end. Could be through bereavement or other loss. It is also about leaving and arriving!
January 19th, 2022 08:41
Stations
L. B. Mek said:
like the creativity, really well written
thanks for sharing
January 10th, 2022 08:24
L. B. Mek said:
like the creativity, really well written
thanks for sharing
January 10th, 2022 08:24
