Comments received on poems by WhispersFromTheAbyss
Mask
Poetic Licence said:
A daily ritual many thousands of people go through daily, preparing the protective mask before they can face the world, well written write.
February 13th, 2025 12:29
Poetic Licence said:
A daily ritual many thousands of people go through daily, preparing the protective mask before they can face the world, well written write.
February 13th, 2025 12:29
See You Later, Angel...
Poetic Licence said:
It is a beautiful tribute, written with love and passion
February 10th, 2025 03:44
Poetic Licence said:
It is a beautiful tribute, written with love and passion
February 10th, 2025 03:44
After I Killed Myself
Your Girlfriend said:
This is wiping all my words away, I cannot think of literally anything else to say. I love it, its amazing!
February 3rd, 2025 15:08
Your Girlfriend said:
This is wiping all my words away, I cannot think of literally anything else to say. I love it, its amazing!
February 3rd, 2025 15:08
After I Killed Myself
Ajax (he/xe) said:
I\'m speechless, honestly, a wonderful work of art.
February 4th, 2022 15:04
Ajax (he/xe) said:
I\'m speechless, honestly, a wonderful work of art.
February 4th, 2022 15:04
After I Killed Myself
Buzz Bray said:
There\'s something fascinating about this. You never say overtly how you feel. You don\'t romanticize suicide. But this dispassionate narrative leads to some powerful feelings. Nicely done.
February 4th, 2022 13:59
Buzz Bray said:
There\'s something fascinating about this. You never say overtly how you feel. You don\'t romanticize suicide. But this dispassionate narrative leads to some powerful feelings. Nicely done.
February 4th, 2022 13:59
After I Killed Myself
Rocky Lagou said:
Yeah, I liked the imagery and the tone that you used, it really set the mood for the rest of the text. I also appreciate the length, since I\'m usually into short poems, good job!
February 4th, 2022 13:58
Rocky Lagou said:
Yeah, I liked the imagery and the tone that you used, it really set the mood for the rest of the text. I also appreciate the length, since I\'m usually into short poems, good job!
February 4th, 2022 13:58
After I Killed Myself
Rocky Lagou said:
Interesting. I like the \"3rd pov\" perspective of this poem. Like a detachment from your body to an onlooker. Good job!👍
February 4th, 2022 13:37
Rocky Lagou said:
Interesting. I like the \"3rd pov\" perspective of this poem. Like a detachment from your body to an onlooker. Good job!👍
February 4th, 2022 13:37
I See
Ajax (he/xe) said:
I\'m in awe. this poem is breathtaking. i hope that life starts to look up for you, and i\'m here if you ever need to talk.
January 19th, 2022 13:50
Ajax (he/xe) said:
I\'m in awe. this poem is breathtaking. i hope that life starts to look up for you, and i\'m here if you ever need to talk.
January 19th, 2022 13:50
