Comments received on poems by xGoldyPupx
After I Killed Myself
Ajax (he/xe) said:
I\'m speechless, honestly, a wonderful work of art.
February 4th, 2022 15:04
Ajax (he/xe) said:
I\'m speechless, honestly, a wonderful work of art.
February 4th, 2022 15:04
After I Killed Myself
Buzz Bray said:
There\'s something fascinating about this. You never say overtly how you feel. You don\'t romanticize suicide. But this dispassionate narrative leads to some powerful feelings. Nicely done.
February 4th, 2022 13:59
Buzz Bray said:
There\'s something fascinating about this. You never say overtly how you feel. You don\'t romanticize suicide. But this dispassionate narrative leads to some powerful feelings. Nicely done.
February 4th, 2022 13:59
After I Killed Myself
Rocky Lagou said:
Yeah, I liked the imagery and the tone that you used, it really set the mood for the rest of the text. I also appreciate the length, since I\'m usually into short poems, good job!
February 4th, 2022 13:58
Rocky Lagou said:
Yeah, I liked the imagery and the tone that you used, it really set the mood for the rest of the text. I also appreciate the length, since I\'m usually into short poems, good job!
February 4th, 2022 13:58
After I Killed Myself
Rocky Lagou said:
Interesting. I like the \"3rd pov\" perspective of this poem. Like a detachment from your body to an onlooker. Good job!👍
February 4th, 2022 13:37
Rocky Lagou said:
Interesting. I like the \"3rd pov\" perspective of this poem. Like a detachment from your body to an onlooker. Good job!👍
February 4th, 2022 13:37
I See
Ajax (he/xe) said:
I\'m in awe. this poem is breathtaking. i hope that life starts to look up for you, and i\'m here if you ever need to talk.
January 19th, 2022 13:50
Ajax (he/xe) said:
I\'m in awe. this poem is breathtaking. i hope that life starts to look up for you, and i\'m here if you ever need to talk.
January 19th, 2022 13:50
