Unoccupied
Paul Bell said:

Love the satire through the journey of life, expectations, more expectations, and finally I died last week. You probably missed the notice under the fish and chips wrapper.

September 10th, 2022 06:13

Ear Worm
L. B. Mek said:

\'A constipated Erykah Badu
That never-ending shit\'

\'So once more again
If you please\'..
lol, a fun portrait
of music\'s addictive, tendencies
thanks for sharing..
(what\'s Erykah, ever done
but be
her whimsical of Sublime soulful self, all her life?
Careful, before those green eyes
melt you! lol)

January 24th, 2022 08:57

Crap Shooter
dusk arising said:

LOL nice piece about a poor soul who cant control his hands when he is emptying his own pockets. Wants to blame someone else for all his shortcomings. Cant get off his ass and make something of himself. Yes, this is a powerful piss-take you have written.

Sadly there are actually people who think like the character you have written about.

January 21st, 2022 12:45