Comments received on poems by zuzu
To feel so deep
2781 said:
For in much wisdom is much grief, and he who increases knowledge increases sorrow.
February 20th, 2023 23:58
2781 said:
For in much wisdom is much grief, and he who increases knowledge increases sorrow.
February 20th, 2023 23:58
Why
Doggerel Dave said:
There is nothing fair in this world. Understand that, swallow it and get on with what you have.
February 20th, 2023 18:40
Doggerel Dave said:
There is nothing fair in this world. Understand that, swallow it and get on with what you have.
February 20th, 2023 18:40
Alone
jarcher54 said:
Zuzu, don\'t stop! It\'s good therapy, and your sincerity makes it moving and tender. Remember, a poem speaks to your audience as well as yourself. Avoid being maudlin or predictable. The end of this is chilling... be well!
February 8th, 2023 20:21
jarcher54 said:
Zuzu, don\'t stop! It\'s good therapy, and your sincerity makes it moving and tender. Remember, a poem speaks to your audience as well as yourself. Avoid being maudlin or predictable. The end of this is chilling... be well!
February 8th, 2023 20:21
Why
Doggerel Dave said:
A nicely balanced write well constructed.
You are definitely wasting your youth however, if you believe those \'things\' you cite cannot change. Turn your attention outwards and note that things do change, You are in the position to ask how and why. Not easy .Takes time, but can be a very rewarding journey if you become an activist and not wallop around writing poetry at your presumably formative age.
Go well and good luck.
February 8th, 2023 19:37
Doggerel Dave said:
A nicely balanced write well constructed.
You are definitely wasting your youth however, if you believe those \'things\' you cite cannot change. Turn your attention outwards and note that things do change, You are in the position to ask how and why. Not easy .Takes time, but can be a very rewarding journey if you become an activist and not wallop around writing poetry at your presumably formative age.
Go well and good luck.
February 8th, 2023 19:37
Alone
A. Unukogbon said:
When you have a beautiful thing,
you wont throw it in the bin;
Loving feels good today,
I smiled when you came my way,
I wont cry when you go away;
If I really loved you,
If this loving was true,
I store the memory in a safe place,
So I smile when I see your face;
Deep feelings well expressed. I like it. Don\'t mind my writing
January 26th, 2022 12:39
A. Unukogbon said:
When you have a beautiful thing,
you wont throw it in the bin;
Loving feels good today,
I smiled when you came my way,
I wont cry when you go away;
If I really loved you,
If this loving was true,
I store the memory in a safe place,
So I smile when I see your face;
Deep feelings well expressed. I like it. Don\'t mind my writing
January 26th, 2022 12:39
