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The wonder we call love
L. B. Mek said:

\'Love is what I want to keep between us
The emotion, The Feeling, The thought
I want it all
I want it all with you\'..
I\'ll freely admit
I may have to borrow these lines
next time I confess.. lol
thanks for sharing, a wonderful read
imbued with such comforting warmth

February 15th, 2022 04:46

Internal
L. B. Mek said:

any chance you can let both stay as they are
instead, try and find a place
in the rivers of your thought\'s
maybe an island of sanctuary
in your mind
where they can both meet, eventually?
see what each have to say, if anything?
how alike or diverse they act
maybe?
if you glean an opportunity
you may find some likeness\'
to exploit and thread your hope, upon
and work, on accepting yourself
broken and despairing, as you may be
allow yourself, to be ok with that
knowing
so many in the world, are just
as confused and splintered, as you are...
only difference, being
some, are trying to heal!
(I wish you all the best! thanks for sharing
keep writing)

February 8th, 2022 05:20

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