Comments received on poems by Katie123



To Those Who Loved and Were Loved
sophin said:

stunning! each line was so well crafted and heartfelt, and the use of repetition really tied things together.

February 8th, 2022 13:10

To Those Who Loved and Were Loved
Rocky Lagou said:

Beautiful work! I felt the line \"Life means all it ever meant\" at such a profound level. It\'s so true though. I love the love going on and the imagery is like a kiss on a sandy beach at dawn. Bravo! 👍💖

February 8th, 2022 09:19

To Those Who Loved and Were Loved
dusk arising said:

This really touched me. Beautiful writing. Life goes on for the living who each carry love and loves for such was the making of us all and yes \"azure remains the sky\".

So beautiful. Into my favourites as a treasure. Many thank yous.

February 8th, 2022 07:22

To Those Who Loved and Were Loved
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
\'My departure will not pause the continuity of songs autumns aurify.
Nothing can alter (not even my death) the destiny of maple leaves blown.\'
(we arrived
we loved
we lived
f\'ck posterity\'s cliff notes
we: Lived!)

February 8th, 2022 07:19

Villanelle of Memories Yet to be Brewed
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words katie.

Andy

February 8th, 2022 02:05

Villanelle of Memories Yet to be Brewed
L. B. Mek said:

really well written, thanks for sharing

February 7th, 2022 06:36

Villanelle of Memories Yet to be Brewed
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Beautiful writing ))

February 7th, 2022 03:13