Comments received on poems by Frank Moses Phiri



Sweet revenge
Lil said:

I just love this.

November 13th, 2023 15:09

Sweet revenge
Tiffany_Arnold said:

This is beautiful

November 13th, 2023 12:40

Adam\'s love sacrifice
orchidee said:

Good write F.

May 30th, 2023 01:38

Adam\'s love sacrifice
Firefall said:

You can really feel the love in your version of the creation story. It captures the happily ever after.

May 28th, 2023 15:41

BOUND
L. B. Mek said:

profound! \'in my humble opinion\'
(indeed, acceptance is key to us
not wasting Time, needlessly
in life..)
thanks for sharing

February 11th, 2022 06:55

Empty Spaces
Daughter of The Vanishing Man said:

This is very well written and deeply felt


February 7th, 2022 20:52

Empty Spaces
Daughter of The Vanishing Man said:

This is very well written and deeply felt


February 7th, 2022 16:19

Empty Spaces
dusk arising said:

Reading this i couldn\'t help but think.... i disagree, empty spaces are there for placing good things into... no rubbish to be cleared away... they are clean and receptive.... Oh that my heart were so empty of the rubbish that has been left there by past loves.

February 7th, 2022 12:26

Empty Spaces
Buzz Bray said:

\"An abyss that’s always taking and never giving back\"
Great use of words and images.

February 7th, 2022 11:57

Empty Spaces
Rocky Lagou said:

Yessss. Holes in our hearts are like itches we can\'t scratch, they\'re always there and annoying. 👏👏Good job!

February 7th, 2022 11:49