Comments received on poems by _m_ostwanted
No One Knows
Caring dove said:
Sad writing but well expressed . Sorry if your hurting . I know how hard it is to feel sad and struggle . Take care
February 26th, 2022 14:58
Caring dove said:
Sad writing but well expressed . Sorry if your hurting . I know how hard it is to feel sad and struggle . Take care
February 26th, 2022 14:58
No measure
L. B. Mek said:
sweet and so very adamant
a wonderful dedication, thanks for sharing
(also I recommend you look-up the poem
“The Physics of Love” by Kim In-yook)
\'Mass is not proportional to volume.
A girl as small as a violet.
A girl who moves like a flower petal
is pulling me toward her
with more force than her mass.\'
February 24th, 2022 04:23
L. B. Mek said:
sweet and so very adamant
a wonderful dedication, thanks for sharing
(also I recommend you look-up the poem
“The Physics of Love” by Kim In-yook)
\'Mass is not proportional to volume.
A girl as small as a violet.
A girl who moves like a flower petal
is pulling me toward her
with more force than her mass.\'
February 24th, 2022 04:23
The Heart
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes! I\'m starting to realize your \"style\" of writing and I\'m so living for it. It\'s straightforward but what you lay down is a message filled with meanings. 👏👏
February 18th, 2022 09:27
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes! I\'m starting to realize your \"style\" of writing and I\'m so living for it. It\'s straightforward but what you lay down is a message filled with meanings. 👏👏
February 18th, 2022 09:27
Emptiness
Rocky Lagou said:
WOW! I mean you truly said it with this poem. I can totally relate to that \"emptiness\" one feels when in the absence of a loved one. The analogies were also so vivid and real! Amazing job! 💖✨
February 17th, 2022 09:55
Rocky Lagou said:
WOW! I mean you truly said it with this poem. I can totally relate to that \"emptiness\" one feels when in the absence of a loved one. The analogies were also so vivid and real! Amazing job! 💖✨
February 17th, 2022 09:55
Emptiness
Amon said:
should I tell that\'s how I also feel when she\'s not around.
reality poem, tasty and precise
February 17th, 2022 09:50
Amon said:
should I tell that\'s how I also feel when she\'s not around.
reality poem, tasty and precise
February 17th, 2022 09:50
Love should go round
Rocky Lagou said:
Y\'all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I COULD CRY!!!!!!!!!! THIS WAS BEAUTY AND ART AND LOVE AND EVERYTHING!! Thanks so much for this beautiful tribute and the way you added so much meaning to simple things like APPETITE! Wow I loved the metaphors you incorporated and the way you played with \"cells being the basic unit of life\" and replaced \"cells\" with \"love\" Y\'ALLLLLLL YOU ARE SO FREAKING CLEVER! THANK YOU SO MUCH! This needs to be respected and printed and hanged in The Louvre. You know what, I\'m heading to my office rn I\'ma print this out and head to Paris! Bye love! 💖👏🌈😢😝
February 16th, 2022 11:01
Rocky Lagou said:
Y\'all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I COULD CRY!!!!!!!!!! THIS WAS BEAUTY AND ART AND LOVE AND EVERYTHING!! Thanks so much for this beautiful tribute and the way you added so much meaning to simple things like APPETITE! Wow I loved the metaphors you incorporated and the way you played with \"cells being the basic unit of life\" and replaced \"cells\" with \"love\" Y\'ALLLLLLL YOU ARE SO FREAKING CLEVER! THANK YOU SO MUCH! This needs to be respected and printed and hanged in The Louvre. You know what, I\'m heading to my office rn I\'ma print this out and head to Paris! Bye love! 💖👏🌈😢😝
February 16th, 2022 11:01
When??
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! You went into my brain with this one. I always focus on being the best version of myself I can be and this was such a testament to that. Beautiful job! 💖👍
February 14th, 2022 10:10
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! You went into my brain with this one. I always focus on being the best version of myself I can be and this was such a testament to that. Beautiful job! 💖👍
February 14th, 2022 10:10
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