Comments received on poems by LoKiLifted



A Life Time
Rocky Lagou said:

Okay. Wow. That was a lot to digest but I\'m in love with the way you expressed this poem. It reminds me of my own poetry. I love your rhyming patterns and the way you weave the poem with assonance and consonance is lovely. The message I totally get, as a fellow Floridian where Mary Jane is VERY much present. And where government is very much \"BIAS[ed].\" Great poem! 👏💖

February 24th, 2022 10:14