Comments received on poems by Annemarie
Tiny Feet
Neville said:
I like these words .. they take me back to when mine were tiny .. I mean my kids .. I dont think mine were ever tiny .. Neville :)
March 26th, 2022 10:34
Neville said:
I like these words .. they take me back to when mine were tiny .. I mean my kids .. I dont think mine were ever tiny .. Neville :)
March 26th, 2022 10:34
Mundane Gifts
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully creative and I think you managed to get across
that panting, out of breath
urgency
in your depiction of emotions, felt
in that moment
but noting, them being accumulative
of your life\'s experiences..
really good pacing and liked
the droplets of contextual details
you sprinkled to give this a more
personal, feel
\'bridge to Terabithia\' imagery
invoking so much
by utilising that one word, so precisely
\'sparkling like a thousand diamond\'..
just such a lovely read, thanks for sharing
March 14th, 2022 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully creative and I think you managed to get across
that panting, out of breath
urgency
in your depiction of emotions, felt
in that moment
but noting, them being accumulative
of your life\'s experiences..
really good pacing and liked
the droplets of contextual details
you sprinkled to give this a more
personal, feel
\'bridge to Terabithia\' imagery
invoking so much
by utilising that one word, so precisely
\'sparkling like a thousand diamond\'..
just such a lovely read, thanks for sharing
March 14th, 2022 04:57
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