Comments received on poems by aburmeister
Some Kind of Magic
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really lovely poem .. I like this 🙂
January 16th, 2023 04:09
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really lovely poem .. I like this 🙂
January 16th, 2023 04:09
Some Kind of Magic
L. B. Mek said:
I like the illusive, feel
you\'ve skilfully cultivated
like a dream we strive to remember
for its picturesque scenes
great style, thanks for sharing
January 16th, 2023 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
I like the illusive, feel
you\'ve skilfully cultivated
like a dream we strive to remember
for its picturesque scenes
great style, thanks for sharing
January 16th, 2023 04:03
Spring Adventures
KarlLund said:
Nice image of simple joys that children can bring to us if we take the time to notice.
April 9th, 2022 14:29
KarlLund said:
Nice image of simple joys that children can bring to us if we take the time to notice.
April 9th, 2022 14:29
Spring Adventures
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Tom Sawyer and Huck Finn? I love it! Cheers to the good old days🥂 and cheers to you🥂🌹🕊🌞Thanks for sharing👍
April 9th, 2022 14:26
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Tom Sawyer and Huck Finn? I love it! Cheers to the good old days🥂 and cheers to you🥂🌹🕊🌞Thanks for sharing👍
April 9th, 2022 14:26
Soul Song
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful writing 🙂 really like this ..
April 9th, 2022 14:14
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful writing 🙂 really like this ..
April 9th, 2022 14:14
Spring Adventures
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sweet poem ,,, I like this 🙂
April 9th, 2022 14:13
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sweet poem ,,, I like this 🙂
April 9th, 2022 14:13
Clean Floor
L. B. Mek said:
cleaning, does have therapeutic benefits
not merely, aesthetically
by its results, alone
much more, I think
comes from the very process, itself
kinda like
writing Poetry, can have
aspects
of cleansing our worries
and a way
to ease our accruing, weary
of life\'s, incessant
bombardment of high\'s and low\'s,
fluctuations
from breath to flickering, breath..
and so I relate
to your words, allegory metaphors..
a clever write
executed with such practised poetic, skill
thank you! for choosing to share
March 29th, 2022 04:32
L. B. Mek said:
cleaning, does have therapeutic benefits
not merely, aesthetically
by its results, alone
much more, I think
comes from the very process, itself
kinda like
writing Poetry, can have
aspects
of cleansing our worries
and a way
to ease our accruing, weary
of life\'s, incessant
bombardment of high\'s and low\'s,
fluctuations
from breath to flickering, breath..
and so I relate
to your words, allegory metaphors..
a clever write
executed with such practised poetic, skill
thank you! for choosing to share
March 29th, 2022 04:32
Tree House
Eugene S. said:
Simple innocence! Oh how I long for those days. Thank you for encapsulating that wonderful sentiment!
March 27th, 2022 12:31
Eugene S. said:
Simple innocence! Oh how I long for those days. Thank you for encapsulating that wonderful sentiment!
March 27th, 2022 12:31
Tree House
Dahlia said:
lovely piece, love the scent of pine trees
Happy Sunday!
Dahlia
March 27th, 2022 12:10
Dahlia said:
lovely piece, love the scent of pine trees
Happy Sunday!
Dahlia
March 27th, 2022 12:10
Tiny Feet
dusk arising said:
I love this, I think one of the most appealing things about kiddies is their tiny feet, I used to call my daughters feet her little fishes.
Your piece has so much fun in it and brings back great memories. I shall want to rediscover it again and again so i\'m putting it into my favourites for sure.
March 26th, 2022 12:34
dusk arising said:
I love this, I think one of the most appealing things about kiddies is their tiny feet, I used to call my daughters feet her little fishes.
Your piece has so much fun in it and brings back great memories. I shall want to rediscover it again and again so i\'m putting it into my favourites for sure.
March 26th, 2022 12:34
Tiny Feet
Neville said:
I like these words .. they take me back to when mine were tiny .. I mean my kids .. I dont think mine were ever tiny .. Neville :)
March 26th, 2022 10:34
Neville said:
I like these words .. they take me back to when mine were tiny .. I mean my kids .. I dont think mine were ever tiny .. Neville :)
March 26th, 2022 10:34
Mundane Gifts
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully creative and I think you managed to get across
that panting, out of breath
urgency
in your depiction of emotions, felt
in that moment
but noting, them being accumulative
of your life\'s experiences..
really good pacing and liked
the droplets of contextual details
you sprinkled to give this a more
personal, feel
\'bridge to Terabithia\' imagery
invoking so much
by utilising that one word, so precisely
\'sparkling like a thousand diamond\'..
just such a lovely read, thanks for sharing
March 14th, 2022 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully creative and I think you managed to get across
that panting, out of breath
urgency
in your depiction of emotions, felt
in that moment
but noting, them being accumulative
of your life\'s experiences..
really good pacing and liked
the droplets of contextual details
you sprinkled to give this a more
personal, feel
\'bridge to Terabithia\' imagery
invoking so much
by utilising that one word, so precisely
\'sparkling like a thousand diamond\'..
just such a lovely read, thanks for sharing
March 14th, 2022 04:57
