Comments received on poems by Gingerpoetryman
Elegy for Steve
Crowns4Christ said:
I\'m sorry,my condolences , beautiful piece,he is very proud of you
March 22nd, 2022 19:55
Crowns4Christ said:
I\'m sorry,my condolences , beautiful piece,he is very proud of you
March 22nd, 2022 19:55
Elegy for Steve
Paul Bell said:
Fantastic epitaph for a hero, and also it seems a great grandad.
March 22nd, 2022 15:01
Paul Bell said:
Fantastic epitaph for a hero, and also it seems a great grandad.
March 22nd, 2022 15:01
Haiku de Español
Rocky Lagou said:
Hola! I\'m also taking a Spanish class for my high school requirement and I\'m also a fellow Spanish-speaker with an intermediate level of knowledge. My parents are Hispanic so we mainly speak Spanish. This was great, however, for it to be grammatically correct I would recommend fixing the second line. \"Encima del mundos, nos,\" in this case your talking about \"mundos\" which by the \"s\" at the end indicates it\'s more than 1 world, so remember that in Spanish when you want to talk about a noun that is plural you would say \"los\" or \"las\" instead of \"el\" or \"la.\" So assuming you intended it to be more than 1 \"mundo\" and not a typo, the correct version would be \"Encima de los mundos, nos\" Just a little bit of constructive criticism, but apart from that it was perfect. 💖
March 18th, 2022 10:31
Rocky Lagou said:
Hola! I\'m also taking a Spanish class for my high school requirement and I\'m also a fellow Spanish-speaker with an intermediate level of knowledge. My parents are Hispanic so we mainly speak Spanish. This was great, however, for it to be grammatically correct I would recommend fixing the second line. \"Encima del mundos, nos,\" in this case your talking about \"mundos\" which by the \"s\" at the end indicates it\'s more than 1 world, so remember that in Spanish when you want to talk about a noun that is plural you would say \"los\" or \"las\" instead of \"el\" or \"la.\" So assuming you intended it to be more than 1 \"mundo\" and not a typo, the correct version would be \"Encima de los mundos, nos\" Just a little bit of constructive criticism, but apart from that it was perfect. 💖
March 18th, 2022 10:31
Poor Tom
Rocky Lagou said:
Hey! I\'m also a fellow high-schooler. I\'m in my sophomore year. This was actually quite good. Witty!
March 18th, 2022 10:14
Rocky Lagou said:
Hey! I\'m also a fellow high-schooler. I\'m in my sophomore year. This was actually quite good. Witty!
March 18th, 2022 10:14
Poor Tom
dean langmuir said:
Thankyou Ginger the poet man I love limericks,poem on
March 17th, 2022 15:12
dean langmuir said:
Thankyou Ginger the poet man I love limericks,poem on
March 17th, 2022 15:12