Comments received on poems by dissociativedandelions
The Sunny Season
L. B. Mek said:
do not assume, the hurt you carry
is a burden only
some of that pain, exists
to help you avoid, making the same mistakes
and if you can avoid repeating, enough
of those same mistakes
that we All, make
again and infuriatingly, again
every time
we choose to entrust our vulnerability
with those, we too quickly
want
to assume, will reciprocate
our sincerity
then, You
are already ahead of so many..
as most of us, have still to learn
what our mistakes are
as we\'re too weak, to face our pain
and distil
the lessons lessons hidden within..
so stay strong, live bold
and put two fingers up, proud
when, inevitably
those scum\'s of the world
cross your path, once again...
(thanks for sharing, great imagery)
April 14th, 2022 03:05
L. B. Mek said:
do not assume, the hurt you carry
is a burden only
some of that pain, exists
to help you avoid, making the same mistakes
and if you can avoid repeating, enough
of those same mistakes
that we All, make
again and infuriatingly, again
every time
we choose to entrust our vulnerability
with those, we too quickly
want
to assume, will reciprocate
our sincerity
then, You
are already ahead of so many..
as most of us, have still to learn
what our mistakes are
as we\'re too weak, to face our pain
and distil
the lessons lessons hidden within..
so stay strong, live bold
and put two fingers up, proud
when, inevitably
those scum\'s of the world
cross your path, once again...
(thanks for sharing, great imagery)
April 14th, 2022 03:05
The Breathing Problem
Rocky Lagou said:
I feel that this could be quite metaphorical to us humans and our own greed. We constantly want and want and it\'s truly interesting to see this sort of \"self-torture\" by not allowing oneself to breathe; a humanly necessity. Great job!
April 11th, 2022 13:01
Rocky Lagou said:
I feel that this could be quite metaphorical to us humans and our own greed. We constantly want and want and it\'s truly interesting to see this sort of \"self-torture\" by not allowing oneself to breathe; a humanly necessity. Great job!
April 11th, 2022 13:01
The Breathing Problem
spilleronsheet said:
A deep insight you drew upon…the lines inking the most precious process keeping us alive…well inked dear poetess
April 11th, 2022 12:37
spilleronsheet said:
A deep insight you drew upon…the lines inking the most precious process keeping us alive…well inked dear poetess
April 11th, 2022 12:37
An Open Letter to Pain
sophin said:
good write, mx. dandelions, your writing style is quite unique. i dabble as well in continuous prose like yours. the imagery is stunning, and invokes an internal inspection of your past selves.
March 19th, 2022 20:22
sophin said:
good write, mx. dandelions, your writing style is quite unique. i dabble as well in continuous prose like yours. the imagery is stunning, and invokes an internal inspection of your past selves.
March 19th, 2022 20:22
An Open Letter to Pain
Palebluecardigan said:
I love how your style of writing is close to mine! The way you express your feelings and describe what\'s happening!! Also, love your username too!!
March 19th, 2022 12:04
Palebluecardigan said:
I love how your style of writing is close to mine! The way you express your feelings and describe what\'s happening!! Also, love your username too!!
March 19th, 2022 12:04
