Comments received on poems by Universal_guarantee
Bedtime (Multiple haikus)
MendedFences27 said:
Very well written Senryu poems. In particular, I enjoyed #3. I\'m sure others would choose otherwise. Human nature gives an unlimited supply of subject matter for these kinds of poems. Yours are very well done. - Phil A.
May 23rd, 2022 14:08
MendedFences27 said:
Very well written Senryu poems. In particular, I enjoyed #3. I\'m sure others would choose otherwise. Human nature gives an unlimited supply of subject matter for these kinds of poems. Yours are very well done. - Phil A.
May 23rd, 2022 14:08
Bedtime (Multiple haikus)
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, life-affirming Senryu\'s
hope fuelled and accessibly, honest
devoid, of any cynically futile lament..
thanks for sharing
May 23rd, 2022 06:00
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, life-affirming Senryu\'s
hope fuelled and accessibly, honest
devoid, of any cynically futile lament..
thanks for sharing
May 23rd, 2022 06:00
Bedtime (Multiple haikus)
orchidee said:
Good writes UG.
You write them while asleep?! lol.
I talk some rubbish. heehee.
May 23rd, 2022 02:11
orchidee said:
Good writes UG.
You write them while asleep?! lol.
I talk some rubbish. heehee.
May 23rd, 2022 02:11
Bedtime (Multiple haikus)
tallisman said:
Brilliantly done! It’s a form I am coming to love and spend hours on, I used to do sudoku but now it’s haiku/senryu instead! That’s the power of this site, I was only vaguely aware of these before I joined and now I’m hooked. If only I was good at them though! Thought yours are really good and thanks….
May 23rd, 2022 00:56
tallisman said:
Brilliantly done! It’s a form I am coming to love and spend hours on, I used to do sudoku but now it’s haiku/senryu instead! That’s the power of this site, I was only vaguely aware of these before I joined and now I’m hooked. If only I was good at them though! Thought yours are really good and thanks….
May 23rd, 2022 00:56
Creativity
Saxon Crow said:
A stick of wood and a vision to change the world. That\'s absolute truth!
April 12th, 2022 07:35
Saxon Crow said:
A stick of wood and a vision to change the world. That\'s absolute truth!
April 12th, 2022 07:35
Ode to a good cup of tea
L. B. Mek said:
\'or perhaps they converse with one another.\'
what a sweet line..
in our chaotically boiling, reality
let us, too
converse, more
with each other, dear Poet
by expressing ourselves
like you do, in this memorable read..
thanks for sharing
April 11th, 2022 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
\'or perhaps they converse with one another.\'
what a sweet line..
in our chaotically boiling, reality
let us, too
converse, more
with each other, dear Poet
by expressing ourselves
like you do, in this memorable read..
thanks for sharing
April 11th, 2022 05:47
Ode to a good cup of tea
Goldfinch60 said:
I too enjoy tea but made the proper way in a teapot with tea leaves. I have both Kenyan and Burundi tea in my cupboard and both are superb.
Good words though LgLL.
Andy
April 11th, 2022 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
I too enjoy tea but made the proper way in a teapot with tea leaves. I have both Kenyan and Burundi tea in my cupboard and both are superb.
Good words though LgLL.
Andy
April 11th, 2022 00:37
