Comments received on poems by Bijapur1993



The Gun
L. B. Mek said:

(thanks for sharing
such an important and timely write
and helping inspire
my little, scribbled reply)..
gun\'s existed before, school shootings
banning the gun\'s, will only put other weapons
in those vile perpetrators hands..
we need to address the real
societal issues
at root of the broken minds
that commit such crimes..
gun\'s are just a target for politics and press
to lament over, and merely a drop in the ocean..
the cultural cesspool
that cultivates
the complex circumstances
that cyclically, recreates
a pattern for this, tragedies
to emerge
from a supposedly, civilised
humanity..
needs to be tackled!
\'in my humble opinion\'

May 26th, 2022 05:22

I have no answers
Dahlia said:

excellent & true
splendid closing lines
Dahlia

March 30th, 2022 16:25

Non healing wound
Crowns4Christ said:

Well written, I can feel the emotion in your words and the fear of that war torn country,may they find the peace that they deserve

March 29th, 2022 22:05

Non healing wound
Bijapur1993 said:

Thx

March 29th, 2022 17:15

Non healing wound
Dahlia said:

excellently penned & so very true
have a great day!


March 29th, 2022 11:52

Non healing wound
L. B. Mek said:

\'The bullet that killed the \'valiant\' soldier
Burnt the soul of the \'passer-by\' civilian, too.\'
so demoralizingly, True
such a poignant read
thanks for sharing

March 29th, 2022 05:06