Comments received on poems by LMTobin
This is the Last Mother\\\\\\\'s Day
Vaughn Walker said:
Very sorrowful. I know this pain well, it is never easy. Thank you for sharing this. ❤️
May 24th, 2022 17:46
Vaughn Walker said:
Very sorrowful. I know this pain well, it is never easy. Thank you for sharing this. ❤️
May 24th, 2022 17:46
This is the Last Mother\\\\\\\'s Day
L. B. Mek said:
your artistry, resoundingly cements
your capacity, to utilise
your suffering and cultivate
something, conducive
to a positive mindset
while facing, bravely
the very worst, life has to throw at us
the fast approaching, loss
of a beloved parent..
an exemplary utilisation
of your Poetic artistry
and I appreciate your nod
to that great poem
by Dylan Thomas:
(
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-30915
)
May 9th, 2022 05:28
L. B. Mek said:
your artistry, resoundingly cements
your capacity, to utilise
your suffering and cultivate
something, conducive
to a positive mindset
while facing, bravely
the very worst, life has to throw at us
the fast approaching, loss
of a beloved parent..
an exemplary utilisation
of your Poetic artistry
and I appreciate your nod
to that great poem
by Dylan Thomas:
(
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-30915
)
May 9th, 2022 05:28
This is the Last Mother\\\\\\\'s Day
Neville said:
My dear LM ..
whereas your words took the wind out of my sails,
Teddy took the words write out of my mouth ..
I sincerely wish you well too my friend ..
Neville
May 9th, 2022 01:48
Neville said:
My dear LM ..
whereas your words took the wind out of my sails,
Teddy took the words write out of my mouth ..
I sincerely wish you well too my friend ..
Neville
May 9th, 2022 01:48
We were careless
Paul Bell said:
I suppose we start with quantity, and when you\'re young, all is sunshine and hope. Then one day you wake up, look around, and wonder the hell where the years went.
April 10th, 2022 03:42
Paul Bell said:
I suppose we start with quantity, and when you\'re young, all is sunshine and hope. Then one day you wake up, look around, and wonder the hell where the years went.
April 10th, 2022 03:42
Imposter
wise.word.weilder said:
Well, I can say that a unique melody is everything else other than boring.
April 8th, 2022 23:07
wise.word.weilder said:
Well, I can say that a unique melody is everything else other than boring.
April 8th, 2022 23:07
Because We Care
Doggerel Dave said:
Not much criticism or debate from me (surprisingly).
Nice use of irony.
I hope you hang on at MPS and provide more.
March 30th, 2022 19:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Not much criticism or debate from me (surprisingly).
Nice use of irony.
I hope you hang on at MPS and provide more.
March 30th, 2022 19:31
Because We Care
Rocky Lagou said:
Truly a horrible time we\'re currently living in. Your poem and excellent imagery really ties it all in. It makes it feel raw and reveals the sad reality. Great job!
March 30th, 2022 08:33
Rocky Lagou said:
Truly a horrible time we\'re currently living in. Your poem and excellent imagery really ties it all in. It makes it feel raw and reveals the sad reality. Great job!
March 30th, 2022 08:33
