Comments received on poems by Vall Davies



Beautiful, just the way you are
Dahlia said:

amazing work poet
Dahlia

April 15th, 2022 18:30

Beautiful, just the way you are
Rozina said:

Beautiful!

April 15th, 2022 17:28

Beautiful, just the way you are
Cassia DeSousa said:

Hello Vall Davies
This is very lovely and truthful
there is beauty in authenticity
tchau...Cassia DeSousa

April 15th, 2022 15:57

One day you\'ll rise
Rocky Lagou said:

Amen. I love this.

April 14th, 2022 08:23

Lay down our weapons
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Vall, it may happen one day that the weapons will be laid down.

Andy

April 11th, 2022 00:28

Lay down our weapons
KarlLund said:

Great poem
its interesting how the atrocities caused by human behavior repeat themselves over &over again

April 10th, 2022 16:46

Lay down our weapons
Dahlia said:

excellently expressed
good job
Dahlia

April 10th, 2022 15:45

Be free, like the birds
Caring dove said:

Yes , to be away from the cruelty and suffering .. and to find freedom .. a nice poem . I think birds may be oblivious to things going on in this world .. although I’m not sure they’d like the thunder or the strong winds

April 9th, 2022 12:18

Be free, like the birds
Dahlia said:

beautiful, I agree
enjoyed
Dahlia

April 9th, 2022 11:39

Suffocate
L. B. Mek said:

truly
love can be so overwhelmingly, painful
to experience..
thanks for sharing
and insuring, we don\'t idolise it
as just that goodness and sweet
we wish it, to be

April 8th, 2022 05:42

Ruling with his iron fist
Dahlia said:

great piece I can think of many ways to apply its message, Dahlia

April 7th, 2022 13:41