Comments received on poems by whispersaroundyou
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Doggerel Dave said:
Keep us informed - month by month. You\'ll outlast me, that\'s for sure.
Not often I am engaged by girls diary entries or looove...but you succeeded...not sure why.
September 26th, 2023 04:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Keep us informed - month by month. You\'ll outlast me, that\'s for sure.
Not often I am engaged by girls diary entries or looove...but you succeeded...not sure why.
September 26th, 2023 04:35
august 14th
L. B. Mek said:
this is worded so relatable, dear Poet
and your conversational tone is accentuated
with your imaginatively scattered layout
(a wonderful way to express
your illusive thoughts and feelings)..
a delight to read from a poetic, perspective
but, a sobering read
in its context and poignancy..
thanks for sharing! stay Strong
August 16th, 2022 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
this is worded so relatable, dear Poet
and your conversational tone is accentuated
with your imaginatively scattered layout
(a wonderful way to express
your illusive thoughts and feelings)..
a delight to read from a poetic, perspective
but, a sobering read
in its context and poignancy..
thanks for sharing! stay Strong
August 16th, 2022 03:45
you
L. B. Mek said:
a kaleidoscopic confession
reading like a sincere, dedication
to someone
who\'s brought the rainbows of your life
within touch..
(I hope these brave words, you share
help
to water your hopes and have your dreams
visit you in reality)
thanks for sharing!
July 28th, 2022 03:19
L. B. Mek said:
a kaleidoscopic confession
reading like a sincere, dedication
to someone
who\'s brought the rainbows of your life
within touch..
(I hope these brave words, you share
help
to water your hopes and have your dreams
visit you in reality)
thanks for sharing!
July 28th, 2022 03:19
avalanche
a thousand wishes said:
I can feel the pain in your words, nice work, please keep writing
June 3rd, 2022 14:32
a thousand wishes said:
I can feel the pain in your words, nice work, please keep writing
June 3rd, 2022 14:32
posessions
L. B. Mek said:
(an intriguing read
inspired me to a find
a question of my own
thanks for sharing..)
this questioning, we indulge
is it serving a purpose
or just our inquisitive nature
warping our reality\'s
semblance of peaceful solemnity...?
May 26th, 2022 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
(an intriguing read
inspired me to a find
a question of my own
thanks for sharing..)
this questioning, we indulge
is it serving a purpose
or just our inquisitive nature
warping our reality\'s
semblance of peaceful solemnity...?
May 26th, 2022 04:44
stranger. | TW: mention of self harm, body image, and eating disorder.
tallisman said:
And yet, the mirror lies
Who you are is not what you see
The real surprise
Is that you are what you want to be
It just takes courage to perceive
That who you are is what you believe
So believe in yourself and you will to
Find time to love yourself…as others love you
May 21st, 2022 02:35
tallisman said:
And yet, the mirror lies
Who you are is not what you see
The real surprise
Is that you are what you want to be
It just takes courage to perceive
That who you are is what you believe
So believe in yourself and you will to
Find time to love yourself…as others love you
May 21st, 2022 02:35
this is a body
L. B. Mek said:
deep!
a fully lived, life\'s
grey hairs and wrinkled skin
deep!
thanks for sharing
May 20th, 2022 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
deep!
a fully lived, life\'s
grey hairs and wrinkled skin
deep!
thanks for sharing
May 20th, 2022 04:44
unfixable | fixable
arqios said:
That is quite true and real, it can and does fix itself. Good read. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
May 16th, 2022 23:12
arqios said:
That is quite true and real, it can and does fix itself. Good read. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
May 16th, 2022 23:12
