Comments received on poems by EmotionsOnwhitepaper
Thoughts...
Saxon Crow said:
A beautiful descriptive poem of your heart. Brilliant
May 1st, 2022 04:36
Saxon Crow said:
A beautiful descriptive poem of your heart. Brilliant
May 1st, 2022 04:36
Thoughts...
ChrisLynđź•Š said:
You indeed described your emotions perfectly.. that feeling.. I know how that feels
May 1st, 2022 02:48
ChrisLynđź•Š said:
You indeed described your emotions perfectly.. that feeling.. I know how that feels
May 1st, 2022 02:48
Student Life
L. B. Mek said:
A great message!
really like how you related your metaphors
to everyday common events
people go through
making your writing, a little more
accessible..
and your contextualised, philosophical
deep dives of causes
makes your suggested, solutions
that much more, tangible..
just a great write!
thank you!
for choosing to share, dear poet
April 28th, 2022 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
A great message!
really like how you related your metaphors
to everyday common events
people go through
making your writing, a little more
accessible..
and your contextualised, philosophical
deep dives of causes
makes your suggested, solutions
that much more, tangible..
just a great write!
thank you!
for choosing to share, dear poet
April 28th, 2022 04:26
By your side
Crowns4Christ said:
This is a sweet caring message to the ones that you love
April 25th, 2022 07:53
Crowns4Christ said:
This is a sweet caring message to the ones that you love
April 25th, 2022 07:53
By your side
spilleronsheet said:
Good one dear poet…sincerity is always appreciated…
April 25th, 2022 06:00
spilleronsheet said:
Good one dear poet…sincerity is always appreciated…
April 25th, 2022 06:00
Boy sets foot in adult world
Crowns4Christ said:
Definitely possible and I think it is worded perfectly
April 18th, 2022 21:10
Crowns4Christ said:
Definitely possible and I think it is worded perfectly
April 18th, 2022 21:10
Boy sets foot in adult world
Rocky Lagou said:
Truly interesting and engaging. The title is really clever.
April 18th, 2022 12:36
Rocky Lagou said:
Truly interesting and engaging. The title is really clever.
April 18th, 2022 12:36
Boy sets foot in adult world
L. B. Mek said:
there\'s a wonderful questing
for distilled meaning
from those insight\'s
you\'ve gleaned of life
in your poetic voice..
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
(stay patient, while striving bravely
in your poetry and life, in general)
April 18th, 2022 05:51
L. B. Mek said:
there\'s a wonderful questing
for distilled meaning
from those insight\'s
you\'ve gleaned of life
in your poetic voice..
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
(stay patient, while striving bravely
in your poetry and life, in general)
April 18th, 2022 05:51
Boy sets foot in adult world
Caring dove said:
I think it’s possible to miss someone you’ve never met .. I like your words
April 18th, 2022 01:53
Caring dove said:
I think it’s possible to miss someone you’ve never met .. I like your words
April 18th, 2022 01:53
Soldier on a Battlefield
Crowns4Christ said:
Wow,you speak your heart, and your struggles as a soldier,a man.
Your love and pain come across perfectly, and the emotion that I feel is so real, I can\'t imagine what you\'re going through, just know that we stand with you and your family and country, you\'re in our prayers
April 16th, 2022 14:36
Crowns4Christ said:
Wow,you speak your heart, and your struggles as a soldier,a man.
Your love and pain come across perfectly, and the emotion that I feel is so real, I can\'t imagine what you\'re going through, just know that we stand with you and your family and country, you\'re in our prayers
April 16th, 2022 14:36
Soldier on a Battlefield
spilleronsheet said:
A very beautiful portrayal of the sacrifices a soldier puts upon
The motherland his family
And his valour the tales and dreams of many
He who leaves every luxury
The sage protecting his country
Leaving behind everything
On whom the whole country proud upon
The mothers pray for his safe return everyday
The sisters pray for his well being on battlefield
Oh dear Soldier
We owe our existence to you
War is cruel
May it not fall upon
But if they do, we are secure cause we know your there to protect us upon
Well crafted dear poet
Keep penning and sharing
A strong emotion of patriotism holds by
Inking a comment by
April 16th, 2022 03:08
spilleronsheet said:
A very beautiful portrayal of the sacrifices a soldier puts upon
The motherland his family
And his valour the tales and dreams of many
He who leaves every luxury
The sage protecting his country
Leaving behind everything
On whom the whole country proud upon
The mothers pray for his safe return everyday
The sisters pray for his well being on battlefield
Oh dear Soldier
We owe our existence to you
War is cruel
May it not fall upon
But if they do, we are secure cause we know your there to protect us upon
Well crafted dear poet
Keep penning and sharing
A strong emotion of patriotism holds by
Inking a comment by
April 16th, 2022 03:08
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