Comments received on poems by EmotionsOnwhitepaper
The Writer
vividvoid14 said:
\"He wrote the lines with tears
He filled the words with warmth\"
i love these lines there relatable, keep writting
February 21st, 2024 10:41
vividvoid14 said:
\"He wrote the lines with tears
He filled the words with warmth\"
i love these lines there relatable, keep writting
February 21st, 2024 10:41
HAVOC INSIDE MY HEAD
Thomas W Case said:
I like that your manic pace is controlled with your flow and word choice. Great work.
October 16th, 2023 00:16
Thomas W Case said:
I like that your manic pace is controlled with your flow and word choice. Great work.
October 16th, 2023 00:16
Pain
dusk arising said:
Standing in those \'empty lanes\' with tears in your eyes, all alone, is the healing time that we all need.
October 26th, 2022 14:24
dusk arising said:
Standing in those \'empty lanes\' with tears in your eyes, all alone, is the healing time that we all need.
October 26th, 2022 14:24
My Own Space
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you\'ve just got to be the bigger person. In saying that, we all need our own space.
September 12th, 2022 04:40
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you\'ve just got to be the bigger person. In saying that, we all need our own space.
September 12th, 2022 04:40
Truth and lies
L. B. Mek said:
so very true
sincerity
comes at a heavy cost
and frankly, most of us
aren\'t looking for some
all perfect truth telling, saint
we just
want someone to be genuine
mean their yes\'s and let us know
of the no\'s, early on
if we get that data, we can curate
what to do next, for ourselves
but all that drama, hedging bets
bul sht
waiting to see, what side is looking
better before making a choice
while keep us waiting, pensive
is just so unnecessarily cruel
they, frustrate us
then make us take that lingering
uncertainty into our next interaction
and then, our past creates problems
for our future, and-on
the self defeating cycles begins..
all because they couldn\'t be straightforward..
(a really relatable read
thanks for sharing)
July 29th, 2022 02:30
L. B. Mek said:
so very true
sincerity
comes at a heavy cost
and frankly, most of us
aren\'t looking for some
all perfect truth telling, saint
we just
want someone to be genuine
mean their yes\'s and let us know
of the no\'s, early on
if we get that data, we can curate
what to do next, for ourselves
but all that drama, hedging bets
bul sht
waiting to see, what side is looking
better before making a choice
while keep us waiting, pensive
is just so unnecessarily cruel
they, frustrate us
then make us take that lingering
uncertainty into our next interaction
and then, our past creates problems
for our future, and-on
the self defeating cycles begins..
all because they couldn\'t be straightforward..
(a really relatable read
thanks for sharing)
July 29th, 2022 02:30
Fighting!
Raven333 said:
I fell ya, I totally can identify with all the feelings and struggles you put down on paper. good write
July 12th, 2022 05:36
Raven333 said:
I fell ya, I totally can identify with all the feelings and struggles you put down on paper. good write
July 12th, 2022 05:36
Ambivalent emotions
orchidee said:
I may have similar problem. Am I \'me\', \'myself\', or \'I\'?! That\'s 3 people! lol. (me being daft).
July 11th, 2022 08:20
orchidee said:
I may have similar problem. Am I \'me\', \'myself\', or \'I\'?! That\'s 3 people! lol. (me being daft).
July 11th, 2022 08:20
Villain (a broken hero or a hero for the broken one)
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing
a clever twist, and yeah
I can so relate
\'be a villain for love\'
that \'bonnie and clyde\'
ride or die, short lived
romance
sounds great on paper
sadly, in reality
its more like, bruises
on faces and heart\'s
restraining orders
single parent households
as breeding grounds
for more messed-up
children
growing-up, having little
awareness of their worth
and so
the cycle of broken, inherited
circumstances
..continues
(it\'s Fck\'d up
since the alternative
is that mild, love
where couples grow old together
and end-up sacrificing their youth
for ungrateful kids
while their flames of desire, deflates
to limp, close proximity\'s
familiarity
and their just co-exist
like someone told them
they have no other choice)
true love
anchored on a timeless
kindred, friendship and attraction
is so, rare..
June 27th, 2022 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing
a clever twist, and yeah
I can so relate
\'be a villain for love\'
that \'bonnie and clyde\'
ride or die, short lived
romance
sounds great on paper
sadly, in reality
its more like, bruises
on faces and heart\'s
restraining orders
single parent households
as breeding grounds
for more messed-up
children
growing-up, having little
awareness of their worth
and so
the cycle of broken, inherited
circumstances
..continues
(it\'s Fck\'d up
since the alternative
is that mild, love
where couples grow old together
and end-up sacrificing their youth
for ungrateful kids
while their flames of desire, deflates
to limp, close proximity\'s
familiarity
and their just co-exist
like someone told them
they have no other choice)
true love
anchored on a timeless
kindred, friendship and attraction
is so, rare..
June 27th, 2022 05:44
If I die..
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Exactly.. I don’t want others to be sad when I die
May 27th, 2022 12:18
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Exactly.. I don’t want others to be sad when I die
May 27th, 2022 12:18
Letter from us
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
I really liked this poem! It’s so beautiful like a story
May 27th, 2022 12:15
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
I really liked this poem! It’s so beautiful like a story
May 27th, 2022 12:15
Meeting decided by our fate ..
Jonas Robinson said:
Good stuff. Thank you for sharing. :)
May 26th, 2022 22:41
Jonas Robinson said:
Good stuff. Thank you for sharing. :)
May 26th, 2022 22:41
Oath..
DestinysPerspectives said:
I love how short, sweet and straight to the point it is. Perfection!
May 18th, 2022 11:35
DestinysPerspectives said:
I love how short, sweet and straight to the point it is. Perfection!
May 18th, 2022 11:35
Comfort zone..
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Ah yes being in your own zone is the best feeling
May 4th, 2022 11:23
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Ah yes being in your own zone is the best feeling
May 4th, 2022 11:23
Comfort zone..
Distant View said:
We cannot always live within our comfort zone in life. If we don\'t push the boundaries sometimes, we\'ll never progress or learn new skills. A pensive kind of poem!
May 4th, 2022 03:37
Distant View said:
We cannot always live within our comfort zone in life. If we don\'t push the boundaries sometimes, we\'ll never progress or learn new skills. A pensive kind of poem!
May 4th, 2022 03:37
Searching...
dusk arising said:
Wherever you are destined to be, you WILL get there. Life is not a race - otherwise we would be born with a number on our back.
May 2nd, 2022 02:01
dusk arising said:
Wherever you are destined to be, you WILL get there. Life is not a race - otherwise we would be born with a number on our back.
May 2nd, 2022 02:01
Thoughts...
Saxon Crow said:
A beautiful descriptive poem of your heart. Brilliant
May 1st, 2022 04:36
Saxon Crow said:
A beautiful descriptive poem of your heart. Brilliant
May 1st, 2022 04:36
Thoughts...
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
You indeed described your emotions perfectly.. that feeling.. I know how that feels
May 1st, 2022 02:48
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
You indeed described your emotions perfectly.. that feeling.. I know how that feels
May 1st, 2022 02:48
Student Life
L. B. Mek said:
A great message!
really like how you related your metaphors
to everyday common events
people go through
making your writing, a little more
accessible..
and your contextualised, philosophical
deep dives of causes
makes your suggested, solutions
that much more, tangible..
just a great write!
thank you!
for choosing to share, dear poet
April 28th, 2022 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
A great message!
really like how you related your metaphors
to everyday common events
people go through
making your writing, a little more
accessible..
and your contextualised, philosophical
deep dives of causes
makes your suggested, solutions
that much more, tangible..
just a great write!
thank you!
for choosing to share, dear poet
April 28th, 2022 04:26
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