Comments received on poems by cameron lynne



Gold
AnxiousMane said:

I high-key like this a lot. I don\'t understand it, but it flows in such a lovely way when I read it out loud

May 10th, 2022 15:17

Suicide
Mike 1o1. said:

Can\'t say that I have been where you are because we are different.
But death is irreversible. I know I\'ve written a few suicide poems myself I just stick around to see what happens next.

April 29th, 2022 23:08

Suicide
Natalia B. Odair said:

My darling Cameron, you write beautiful poetry from the pain that swells in your heart. Though things seem hopeless now, they will get better eventually. Things may not be okay right now, but I swear to you they will get better. You are strong, you are beautiful, YOU MATTER. Don\'t let the hate overwhelm you. Cherish yourself, because you only get one life, and the sands of time and despair wash away to many young people already. We all love you. I\'m here for you. We all are.
Love forever and ever,
Nat B. ❤❤❤

April 29th, 2022 18:27

Suicide
Crowns4Christ said:

Oh Cameron, suicide isn\'t the answer, for anything, I know that at times it seems like the only answer,but I can assure you that there is so much more to life than what you\'ve experienced, you\'re young,with your entire life ahead of you, and suicide,is just, just a way to not have to deal,but life is so rewarding when you accomplish things that you only dreamed of and never thought possible, anything is possible,it just takes work and dedication, you can do and be anything you want, I believe in you,if you ever want someone to talk to,you can always talk to me about anything

April 29th, 2022 17:21

Religious Confusion
empty vial said:

beatiful poem!

April 25th, 2022 14:14

Religious Confusion
Rocky Lagou said:

Relatable. Talk about it, religion and the need for a reason and a purpose. Yet that final line, sums it up. Sometimes our only comfort comes from others, whether it be a parent, friend, or lover. That line \"I know you’ll stop the bleeding
Why won’t you stop the pain?\" is also worthy of notice. Wondefully crafted.


April 25th, 2022 13:28

Railroad
KS* said:

That is beautiful!!

April 24th, 2022 10:23

Wine
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Interesting words .. good poem ))

April 23rd, 2022 00:06

Sparrow
Rozina said:

I enjoyed your lovely poem.

April 22nd, 2022 19:59

Sparrow
distorted mikey said:

this is so lovely, and strangely nostalgic, it\'s such beautiful writing! I especially loved the ending line

April 22nd, 2022 13:44

Sparrow
Rocky Lagou said:

I love the shortness of your poems. This one is quite thought-provoking and I sense the line \"Can you hear it the way I do?
/ Wrong and harsh, but true?\" could refer to the hard truth we all have to accept in life. Great job!


April 22nd, 2022 12:42

Flowers
Rocky Lagou said:

These are some quite invasive flowers, hehe. I can just imagine them crawling. Nonetheless, there\'s some deep meaning here, with the whole \"innocene\" line. Well done!


April 21st, 2022 12:38

Flowers
empty vial said:

great poem !!

April 21st, 2022 10:27

Wasteland
L. B. Mek said:

beautifully constructed
your verses are layered, with purpose
I especially like how you play with imagery
and metaphor, without over stressing its presence
subtlety, is the key word here I think
and of course, such a showcasing of practised
and oh so elegant, poetic skill:
\'A small harsh requiem
In the dark and fire raining
I’ll go looking for you then

The pillars are asunder
Strength no longer mine
In the soft remains of plunder\'..
(a privilege to read and a treat to ponder
thank you, for choosing to share
dear Poet)

April 21st, 2022 03:32