Comments received on poems by ChrisLyn🕊
POEMS OF THE PAST-1 ( MY MOTHER)
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
“You are more precious than wealth” This line really says a lot. I think duel working parents should really rethink what’s best for their children. Children care about receiving love from their parents more than money. Even if they’re too young to realize it. I know this probably wasn’t the message you’re going for. But that line really does say sooo much about the subject of duel working parents. Great poem you’ve penned for your mom,and at such a young age. Thanks for sharing. Cheers🥂🌹🕊🌞
May 7th, 2022 07:45
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
“You are more precious than wealth” This line really says a lot. I think duel working parents should really rethink what’s best for their children. Children care about receiving love from their parents more than money. Even if they’re too young to realize it. I know this probably wasn’t the message you’re going for. But that line really does say sooo much about the subject of duel working parents. Great poem you’ve penned for your mom,and at such a young age. Thanks for sharing. Cheers🥂🌹🕊🌞
May 7th, 2022 07:45
ITS OKAY TO NOT BE OKAY 📉
Neville said:
you are absolutely write my friend .. and as far as I am concerned, these words should be heard by all the worlds downtrodden, undervalued, misunderstood and unloved ..
oh\' and do feel free folks to add your own de-valued group above the dotted line :) ..................... N💖x
May 4th, 2022 13:05
Neville said:
you are absolutely write my friend .. and as far as I am concerned, these words should be heard by all the worlds downtrodden, undervalued, misunderstood and unloved ..
oh\' and do feel free folks to add your own de-valued group above the dotted line :) ..................... N💖x
May 4th, 2022 13:05
ITS OKAY TO NOT BE OKAY 📉
Nicholas Browning said:
To feel is no crime! Preach it!
May 4th, 2022 06:35
Nicholas Browning said:
To feel is no crime! Preach it!
May 4th, 2022 06:35
ITS OKAY TO NOT BE OKAY 📉
Distant View said:
Every day is different. On any given day, someone somewhere will be on a downer while someone else will be having the time of their life. That\'s the way it is for the whole world. We have to roll with the punches and hang on in there!
May 4th, 2022 03:17
Distant View said:
Every day is different. On any given day, someone somewhere will be on a downer while someone else will be having the time of their life. That\'s the way it is for the whole world. We have to roll with the punches and hang on in there!
May 4th, 2022 03:17
ITS OKAY TO NOT BE OKAY 📉
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
I love the theme, very well expressed..👌🔥
May 4th, 2022 01:55
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
I love the theme, very well expressed..👌🔥
May 4th, 2022 01:55
MY FAVOURITE THINGS🔱
Michael Edwards said:
I love this and can empathise - I lose myself in my studio and submerge myself in classical music and my art - woe betide anyone who disturbs.
May 3rd, 2022 09:40
Michael Edwards said:
I love this and can empathise - I lose myself in my studio and submerge myself in classical music and my art - woe betide anyone who disturbs.
May 3rd, 2022 09:40
MY FAVOURITE THINGS🔱
L. B. Mek said:
(may I recommend
the song
\'a private party
by India Arie\')
keep that free spirit
all your life
and \'come what may\'
you\'ll find
an escape clause, readymade
if you can love
loving, on yourself
and no!
that\'s got nothing
to do with ego or conceit
its survival 101
for those, gentle hearted
in the world...
stay defiant and strong!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 3rd, 2022 04:18
L. B. Mek said:
(may I recommend
the song
\'a private party
by India Arie\')
keep that free spirit
all your life
and \'come what may\'
you\'ll find
an escape clause, readymade
if you can love
loving, on yourself
and no!
that\'s got nothing
to do with ego or conceit
its survival 101
for those, gentle hearted
in the world...
stay defiant and strong!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 3rd, 2022 04:18
MY FAVOURITE THINGS🔱
Saxon Crow said:
Agree. Alone time is important. We get to be our true quirky selves as your poem wonderfully shows.
May 3rd, 2022 01:18
Saxon Crow said:
Agree. Alone time is important. We get to be our true quirky selves as your poem wonderfully shows.
May 3rd, 2022 01:18
PAST MIDNIGHT 🪞
L. B. Mek said:
hope these words, let you heal
even if a little
I can see by favouriting yourself
how intimate
this write was for you, thank you!
for choosing to share
May 2nd, 2022 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
hope these words, let you heal
even if a little
I can see by favouriting yourself
how intimate
this write was for you, thank you!
for choosing to share
May 2nd, 2022 05:19
PAST MIDNIGHT 🪞
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Woah...u really put your thoughts very clearly... I wish he comes back to u
May 2nd, 2022 04:13
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Woah...u really put your thoughts very clearly... I wish he comes back to u
May 2nd, 2022 04:13
THE GREAT FRIEND IN YOU🌠
Neville said:
we could all use a BF like that .. I know I could ................ you are both so very lucky ................ Neville
May 1st, 2022 16:24
Neville said:
we could all use a BF like that .. I know I could ................ you are both so very lucky ................ Neville
May 1st, 2022 16:24
THE GREAT FRIEND IN YOU🌠
Michael Edwards said:
Like SC mine is my wife. Great write.
May 1st, 2022 08:30
Michael Edwards said:
Like SC mine is my wife. Great write.
May 1st, 2022 08:30
THE GREAT FRIEND IN YOU🌠
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
U described your bond so beautifully... My best friends are the only people where i m able to be myself.
U and ur bf have such a nice bond that i can feel it in ur poem.🔥
May 1st, 2022 06:18
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
U described your bond so beautifully... My best friends are the only people where i m able to be myself.
U and ur bf have such a nice bond that i can feel it in ur poem.🔥
May 1st, 2022 06:18
THE GREAT FRIEND IN YOU🌠
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
U described your bond so beautifully... My best friends they are the most important and precious people in my life. I adore them very much.
U and ur bf have such a nice bond that i can feel it in ur poem.🔥
May 1st, 2022 06:15
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
U described your bond so beautifully... My best friends they are the most important and precious people in my life. I adore them very much.
U and ur bf have such a nice bond that i can feel it in ur poem.🔥
May 1st, 2022 06:15
THE GREAT FRIEND IN YOU🌠
Saxon Crow said:
A lovely poem for an amazing friend. My best friend is my wife.... All.my life
May 1st, 2022 04:29
Saxon Crow said:
A lovely poem for an amazing friend. My best friend is my wife.... All.my life
May 1st, 2022 04:29
THE CIRCLE OF CONFUSION⭕️
Crowns4Christ said:
Sounds like the mystery of life, everything has upsides and down,but sometimes the downsides are actually blessings in disguise,
Like my husband and I both went through bad breakups with our exes, and we didn\'t feel like we would ever get over them,but when we met here on MPS,our whole lives changed, for the better, so,our heartbreak turned into our happiness
April 30th, 2022 15:33
Crowns4Christ said:
Sounds like the mystery of life, everything has upsides and down,but sometimes the downsides are actually blessings in disguise,
Like my husband and I both went through bad breakups with our exes, and we didn\'t feel like we would ever get over them,but when we met here on MPS,our whole lives changed, for the better, so,our heartbreak turned into our happiness
April 30th, 2022 15:33
THE CIRCLE OF CONFUSION⭕️
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
This poem represented my thoughts so clearly. 😢🔥🔥🔥
April 30th, 2022 12:20
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
This poem represented my thoughts so clearly. 😢🔥🔥🔥
April 30th, 2022 12:20
THE CIRCLE OF CONFUSION⭕️
Paul Bell said:
Ying and Yang, always together, apart and no one knows why. Maybe that\'s life in a beat.
April 30th, 2022 11:51
Paul Bell said:
Ying and Yang, always together, apart and no one knows why. Maybe that\'s life in a beat.
April 30th, 2022 11:51
MY GREY RAINBOW ☔️
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Indeed it is ! Thanks for sharing and reading my poem🌟
April 30th, 2022 11:17
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Indeed it is ! Thanks for sharing and reading my poem🌟
April 30th, 2022 11:17
THE CIRCLE OF CONFUSION⭕️
Accidental Poet said:
Life is like a puzzle ChrisLyn. Hope you find all your puzzle pieces. 😉
April 30th, 2022 10:10
Accidental Poet said:
Life is like a puzzle ChrisLyn. Hope you find all your puzzle pieces. 😉
April 30th, 2022 10:10
MY GREY RAINBOW ☔️
Accidental Poet said:
Very true ChrisLyn, we have all been through these trying times. Life comes without an instruction manual, so we\'re left to figuring it all out for ourselves. But...it helps to know that we\'re not alone, it\'s a common occurrence in these modern times. And writing poetry is a huge therapy and stress reliving tool. I\'ve been writing over 20 years now. It\'s one of the biggest and most positive things I\'ve done in my elder years. Excellent write ChrisLyn. 😉
April 30th, 2022 09:53
Accidental Poet said:
Very true ChrisLyn, we have all been through these trying times. Life comes without an instruction manual, so we\'re left to figuring it all out for ourselves. But...it helps to know that we\'re not alone, it\'s a common occurrence in these modern times. And writing poetry is a huge therapy and stress reliving tool. I\'ve been writing over 20 years now. It\'s one of the biggest and most positive things I\'ve done in my elder years. Excellent write ChrisLyn. 😉
April 30th, 2022 09:53
STUTTER MONSTER 😶🌫️
Accidental Poet said:
As Distant View said, \"our real friends don\'t care whether we stutter or not\". And here at MPS you\'re among real friends. blue orchid said \"there\'s an old country singer, Mel Tillis, he stuttered really bad\". I remember seeing him talking and stuttering, then he hit the back of his head as if to knock his words out of his mouth. Laughed hysterically. And a co-worker of mine stutters a lot. But we just let him take his time and he\'s fine. Great write ChrisLyn. 😉
April 30th, 2022 09:13
Accidental Poet said:
As Distant View said, \"our real friends don\'t care whether we stutter or not\". And here at MPS you\'re among real friends. blue orchid said \"there\'s an old country singer, Mel Tillis, he stuttered really bad\". I remember seeing him talking and stuttering, then he hit the back of his head as if to knock his words out of his mouth. Laughed hysterically. And a co-worker of mine stutters a lot. But we just let him take his time and he\'s fine. Great write ChrisLyn. 😉
April 30th, 2022 09:13
STUTTER MONSTER 😶🌫️
Crowns4Christ said:
I love this, I used to have a horrible stutter, and there\'s an old country singer, Mel Tillis, he stuttered really bad when he talked but sang perfectly and the poet walt Whitman,used to stutter but overcame it by reciting poetry out loud, and the best of all, Moses, He had a stuttering problem, did you know that, when I found that out, I didn\'t care anymore if I stuttered or not, and no longer got nervous when I talked and gradually got more confident and stutter is gone now, I struggled with it for 35 years
April 29th, 2022 18:47
Crowns4Christ said:
I love this, I used to have a horrible stutter, and there\'s an old country singer, Mel Tillis, he stuttered really bad when he talked but sang perfectly and the poet walt Whitman,used to stutter but overcame it by reciting poetry out loud, and the best of all, Moses, He had a stuttering problem, did you know that, when I found that out, I didn\'t care anymore if I stuttered or not, and no longer got nervous when I talked and gradually got more confident and stutter is gone now, I struggled with it for 35 years
April 29th, 2022 18:47
STUTTER MONSTER 😶🌫️
Distant View said:
I can fully relate to this poem, as I am a sufferer as a stutterer too! Yes, people (including some family members!) complete my sentences for me, when I hesitate (most annoying, but they are only trying to help). I play guitar and sing, with never a stutter in sight! But a stutter can be socially debilitating to some degree. We just have to learn to live with it, and know that our real friends don\'t care whether we stutter or not. A brave write! I congratulate you!
April 29th, 2022 07:07
Distant View said:
I can fully relate to this poem, as I am a sufferer as a stutterer too! Yes, people (including some family members!) complete my sentences for me, when I hesitate (most annoying, but they are only trying to help). I play guitar and sing, with never a stutter in sight! But a stutter can be socially debilitating to some degree. We just have to learn to live with it, and know that our real friends don\'t care whether we stutter or not. A brave write! I congratulate you!
April 29th, 2022 07:07
STUTTER MONSTER 😶🌫️
L. B. Mek said:
until I watched the film
\'the king\'s speech\'
I never truly comprehended
how all-consuming
and debilitating, such an obstacle
can become, in peoples lives..
it really has a psychological
element, that far exceeds
the physical limitations..
someone with the highest IQ
can be made to feel, so inept
truly
a hard condition to live with..
and yet, here
you\'ve made it your, B\'tch!
\'More power to you!\'
Stay strong! dear Poet
thanks for sharing
April 29th, 2022 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
until I watched the film
\'the king\'s speech\'
I never truly comprehended
how all-consuming
and debilitating, such an obstacle
can become, in peoples lives..
it really has a psychological
element, that far exceeds
the physical limitations..
someone with the highest IQ
can be made to feel, so inept
truly
a hard condition to live with..
and yet, here
you\'ve made it your, B\'tch!
\'More power to you!\'
Stay strong! dear Poet
thanks for sharing
April 29th, 2022 05:11
STUTTER MONSTER 😶🌫️
Saxon Crow said:
This is brilliant Krissy. My step sister has had a stutter all her life. It comes out a lot more strongly to when she feels stressed.
April 29th, 2022 04:49
Saxon Crow said:
This is brilliant Krissy. My step sister has had a stutter all her life. It comes out a lot more strongly to when she feels stressed.
April 29th, 2022 04:49
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