Comments received on poems by ChrisLyn🕊
MONDAY BLUES🌀
MendedFences27 said:
Oh, how to ruin a great dream. The tone of this poem is perfect and the harsh ending surprises. The reader feels the shock and yet knows it well.
Great craftsmanship. - Phil A.
May 20th, 2022 10:51
MendedFences27 said:
Oh, how to ruin a great dream. The tone of this poem is perfect and the harsh ending surprises. The reader feels the shock and yet knows it well.
Great craftsmanship. - Phil A.
May 20th, 2022 10:51
MONDAY BLUES🌀
L. B. Mek said:
\'Mother Nature here is indeed a woman with great poise.\'
Amen!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 20th, 2022 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'Mother Nature here is indeed a woman with great poise.\'
Amen!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 20th, 2022 05:11
POEMS OF THE PAST-2 ( MY FATHER)
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Such a nice poem, u showed the love to your dad and your dad to u all so easily but deeply.. 😍
May 12th, 2022 13:42
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Such a nice poem, u showed the love to your dad and your dad to u all so easily but deeply.. 😍
May 12th, 2022 13:42
POEMS OF THE PAST-2 ( MY FATHER)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Chris showing your love for your Dad.
Andy
May 9th, 2022 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Chris showing your love for your Dad.
Andy
May 9th, 2022 00:21
POEMS OF THE PAST-1 ( MY MOTHER)
Neville said:
My dear ChrisLyn🕊 I know for an absolute fact that your mom was not the only one whose eyes filled up with happy tears when they heard these words 🕊 ♥️ Neville
May 8th, 2022 02:50
Neville said:
My dear ChrisLyn🕊 I know for an absolute fact that your mom was not the only one whose eyes filled up with happy tears when they heard these words 🕊 ♥️ Neville
May 8th, 2022 02:50
POEMS OF THE PAST-1 ( MY MOTHER)
Rozina said:
A very nice tribute to your mum. As a mother I would be so happy to see a poem like this from my child. Lovely!
May 7th, 2022 18:29
Rozina said:
A very nice tribute to your mum. As a mother I would be so happy to see a poem like this from my child. Lovely!
May 7th, 2022 18:29
POEMS OF THE PAST-1 ( MY MOTHER)
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Ppl mostly appreciated those who could dance , sing etc.. writing was just secondary. I’m glad I started sharing my poems here on this site and getting feedback’s from phenomenal poets is just like icing on d cake . So thank u once again. 😊And yes, it’s truly his loss.😉
May 7th, 2022 13:31
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Ppl mostly appreciated those who could dance , sing etc.. writing was just secondary. I’m glad I started sharing my poems here on this site and getting feedback’s from phenomenal poets is just like icing on d cake . So thank u once again. 😊And yes, it’s truly his loss.😉
May 7th, 2022 13:31
POEMS OF THE PAST-1 ( MY MOTHER)
Accidental Poet said:
You wrote this for your mom in the 6th grade? Just goes to show you were meant to write ChrisLyn. And I know what you mean of your friends not appreciating your written words. I used to have a best friend who would smirk when I read a poem to him. I sensed him saying, \"Real guys don\'t write poetry\". to which my response would have been, \"and what do you know of being a real guy?\" Needless to say, we\'re no longer friends. His loss. 😊
May 7th, 2022 09:33
Accidental Poet said:
You wrote this for your mom in the 6th grade? Just goes to show you were meant to write ChrisLyn. And I know what you mean of your friends not appreciating your written words. I used to have a best friend who would smirk when I read a poem to him. I sensed him saying, \"Real guys don\'t write poetry\". to which my response would have been, \"and what do you know of being a real guy?\" Needless to say, we\'re no longer friends. His loss. 😊
May 7th, 2022 09:33
POEMS OF THE PAST-1 ( MY MOTHER)
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
“You are more precious than wealth” This line really says a lot. I think duel working parents should really rethink what’s best for their children. Children care about receiving love from their parents more than money. Even if they’re too young to realize it. I know this probably wasn’t the message you’re going for. But that line really does say sooo much about the subject of duel working parents. Great poem you’ve penned for your mom,and at such a young age. Thanks for sharing. Cheers🥂🌹🕊🌞
May 7th, 2022 07:45
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
“You are more precious than wealth” This line really says a lot. I think duel working parents should really rethink what’s best for their children. Children care about receiving love from their parents more than money. Even if they’re too young to realize it. I know this probably wasn’t the message you’re going for. But that line really does say sooo much about the subject of duel working parents. Great poem you’ve penned for your mom,and at such a young age. Thanks for sharing. Cheers🥂🌹🕊🌞
May 7th, 2022 07:45
ITS OKAY TO NOT BE OKAY 📉
Neville said:
you are absolutely write my friend .. and as far as I am concerned, these words should be heard by all the worlds downtrodden, undervalued, misunderstood and unloved ..
oh\' and do feel free folks to add your own de-valued group above the dotted line :) ..................... N💖x
May 4th, 2022 13:05
Neville said:
you are absolutely write my friend .. and as far as I am concerned, these words should be heard by all the worlds downtrodden, undervalued, misunderstood and unloved ..
oh\' and do feel free folks to add your own de-valued group above the dotted line :) ..................... N💖x
May 4th, 2022 13:05
ITS OKAY TO NOT BE OKAY 📉
Nicholas Browning said:
To feel is no crime! Preach it!
May 4th, 2022 06:35
Nicholas Browning said:
To feel is no crime! Preach it!
May 4th, 2022 06:35
ITS OKAY TO NOT BE OKAY 📉
Distant View said:
Every day is different. On any given day, someone somewhere will be on a downer while someone else will be having the time of their life. That\'s the way it is for the whole world. We have to roll with the punches and hang on in there!
May 4th, 2022 03:17
Distant View said:
Every day is different. On any given day, someone somewhere will be on a downer while someone else will be having the time of their life. That\'s the way it is for the whole world. We have to roll with the punches and hang on in there!
May 4th, 2022 03:17
ITS OKAY TO NOT BE OKAY 📉
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
I love the theme, very well expressed..👌🔥
May 4th, 2022 01:55
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
I love the theme, very well expressed..👌🔥
May 4th, 2022 01:55
MY FAVOURITE THINGS🔱
Michael Edwards said:
I love this and can empathise - I lose myself in my studio and submerge myself in classical music and my art - woe betide anyone who disturbs.
May 3rd, 2022 09:40
Michael Edwards said:
I love this and can empathise - I lose myself in my studio and submerge myself in classical music and my art - woe betide anyone who disturbs.
May 3rd, 2022 09:40
MY FAVOURITE THINGS🔱
L. B. Mek said:
(may I recommend
the song
\'a private party
by India Arie\')
keep that free spirit
all your life
and \'come what may\'
you\'ll find
an escape clause, readymade
if you can love
loving, on yourself
and no!
that\'s got nothing
to do with ego or conceit
its survival 101
for those, gentle hearted
in the world...
stay defiant and strong!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 3rd, 2022 04:18
L. B. Mek said:
(may I recommend
the song
\'a private party
by India Arie\')
keep that free spirit
all your life
and \'come what may\'
you\'ll find
an escape clause, readymade
if you can love
loving, on yourself
and no!
that\'s got nothing
to do with ego or conceit
its survival 101
for those, gentle hearted
in the world...
stay defiant and strong!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 3rd, 2022 04:18
MY FAVOURITE THINGS🔱
Saxon Crow said:
Agree. Alone time is important. We get to be our true quirky selves as your poem wonderfully shows.
May 3rd, 2022 01:18
Saxon Crow said:
Agree. Alone time is important. We get to be our true quirky selves as your poem wonderfully shows.
May 3rd, 2022 01:18
PAST MIDNIGHT 🪞
L. B. Mek said:
hope these words, let you heal
even if a little
I can see by favouriting yourself
how intimate
this write was for you, thank you!
for choosing to share
May 2nd, 2022 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
hope these words, let you heal
even if a little
I can see by favouriting yourself
how intimate
this write was for you, thank you!
for choosing to share
May 2nd, 2022 05:19
PAST MIDNIGHT 🪞
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Woah...u really put your thoughts very clearly... I wish he comes back to u
May 2nd, 2022 04:13
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Woah...u really put your thoughts very clearly... I wish he comes back to u
May 2nd, 2022 04:13
THE GREAT FRIEND IN YOU🌠
Neville said:
we could all use a BF like that .. I know I could ................ you are both so very lucky ................ Neville
May 1st, 2022 16:24
Neville said:
we could all use a BF like that .. I know I could ................ you are both so very lucky ................ Neville
May 1st, 2022 16:24
THE GREAT FRIEND IN YOU🌠
Michael Edwards said:
Like SC mine is my wife. Great write.
May 1st, 2022 08:30
Michael Edwards said:
Like SC mine is my wife. Great write.
May 1st, 2022 08:30
THE GREAT FRIEND IN YOU🌠
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
U described your bond so beautifully... My best friends are the only people where i m able to be myself.
U and ur bf have such a nice bond that i can feel it in ur poem.🔥
May 1st, 2022 06:18
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
U described your bond so beautifully... My best friends are the only people where i m able to be myself.
U and ur bf have such a nice bond that i can feel it in ur poem.🔥
May 1st, 2022 06:18
THE GREAT FRIEND IN YOU🌠
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
U described your bond so beautifully... My best friends they are the most important and precious people in my life. I adore them very much.
U and ur bf have such a nice bond that i can feel it in ur poem.🔥
May 1st, 2022 06:15
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
U described your bond so beautifully... My best friends they are the most important and precious people in my life. I adore them very much.
U and ur bf have such a nice bond that i can feel it in ur poem.🔥
May 1st, 2022 06:15
THE GREAT FRIEND IN YOU🌠
Saxon Crow said:
A lovely poem for an amazing friend. My best friend is my wife.... All.my life
May 1st, 2022 04:29
Saxon Crow said:
A lovely poem for an amazing friend. My best friend is my wife.... All.my life
May 1st, 2022 04:29
THE CIRCLE OF CONFUSION⭕️
Crowns4Christ said:
Sounds like the mystery of life, everything has upsides and down,but sometimes the downsides are actually blessings in disguise,
Like my husband and I both went through bad breakups with our exes, and we didn\'t feel like we would ever get over them,but when we met here on MPS,our whole lives changed, for the better, so,our heartbreak turned into our happiness
April 30th, 2022 15:33
Crowns4Christ said:
Sounds like the mystery of life, everything has upsides and down,but sometimes the downsides are actually blessings in disguise,
Like my husband and I both went through bad breakups with our exes, and we didn\'t feel like we would ever get over them,but when we met here on MPS,our whole lives changed, for the better, so,our heartbreak turned into our happiness
April 30th, 2022 15:33
THE CIRCLE OF CONFUSION⭕️
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
This poem represented my thoughts so clearly. 😢🔥🔥🔥
April 30th, 2022 12:20
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
This poem represented my thoughts so clearly. 😢🔥🔥🔥
April 30th, 2022 12:20
THE CIRCLE OF CONFUSION⭕️
Paul Bell said:
Ying and Yang, always together, apart and no one knows why. Maybe that\'s life in a beat.
April 30th, 2022 11:51
Paul Bell said:
Ying and Yang, always together, apart and no one knows why. Maybe that\'s life in a beat.
April 30th, 2022 11:51
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