Comments received on poems by Urgirl_martini
Overthinking
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, martini,
The aftertaste is what lingers more so than the original offering, be it good or bad it\'s what we remember most. I love the poem in its completeness but espically: \'Church chimes fade into rum\' - that, I can relate to. Excellent!
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
October 4th, 2026 10:22
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, martini,
The aftertaste is what lingers more so than the original offering, be it good or bad it\'s what we remember most. I love the poem in its completeness but espically: \'Church chimes fade into rum\' - that, I can relate to. Excellent!
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
October 4th, 2026 10:22
Overthinking
sorenbarrett said:
All things are not what they seem. A lovely write.
October 4th, 2026 10:21
sorenbarrett said:
All things are not what they seem. A lovely write.
October 4th, 2026 10:21
Overthinking
Urgirl_martini said:
Got overtly creative with this one... might have lost cohesive meaning in the process. 😅
October 4th, 2026 09:23
Urgirl_martini said:
Got overtly creative with this one... might have lost cohesive meaning in the process. 😅
October 4th, 2026 09:23
Maybe I should kill myself?
Tony Grannell said:
The nonchalant approach to the subject in a poetc rendering makes it all the more effective, so, too, quiet disturbing until your final stanza. One must always abide by the morning\'s forgiveness and of course, the first coffee of the day. The poem flows beautifully and rhymed to perfection. Well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony,
October 4th, 2026 09:07
Tony Grannell said:
The nonchalant approach to the subject in a poetc rendering makes it all the more effective, so, too, quiet disturbing until your final stanza. One must always abide by the morning\'s forgiveness and of course, the first coffee of the day. The poem flows beautifully and rhymed to perfection. Well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony,
October 4th, 2026 09:07
Maybe I should kill myself?
2781 said:
I gave it a like, for its truthfulness, even if it wasn\'t true?
October 3rd, 2026 07:32
2781 said:
I gave it a like, for its truthfulness, even if it wasn\'t true?
October 3rd, 2026 07:32
Maybe I should kill myself?
sorenbarrett said:
How emotions vary on the back of bubbling hormones. A lovely write that conveys well the roller coaster ride of youth.
October 3rd, 2026 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
How emotions vary on the back of bubbling hormones. A lovely write that conveys well the roller coaster ride of youth.
October 3rd, 2026 06:48
Old Story
sorenbarrett said:
Creative with font and bold as well as size change and color. Nicely done
October 2nd, 2026 10:25
sorenbarrett said:
Creative with font and bold as well as size change and color. Nicely done
October 2nd, 2026 10:25
all about you and me
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poetic focus on one link in a chain. So brief but says a lot.
September 24th, 2026 03:33
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poetic focus on one link in a chain. So brief but says a lot.
September 24th, 2026 03:33
Another Wednesday
isa kemmy said:
I do also hate goodbyes but one thing is clear, every person who comes in life taught me something got memories that i treasure
September 22nd, 2026 09:25
isa kemmy said:
I do also hate goodbyes but one thing is clear, every person who comes in life taught me something got memories that i treasure
September 22nd, 2026 09:25
Another Wednesday
sorenbarrett said:
We too often do not tell others how important they are to us and loose the chance. Well written
September 22nd, 2026 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
We too often do not tell others how important they are to us and loose the chance. Well written
September 22nd, 2026 06:34
Forgive me.
sorenbarrett said:
It is the message so cleverly said in rhyme that gets the fave. It is so common to let a dream rule a relationship to try and mold another to fit your form and image of ideal. People are not perfect but are they perfect for you. Well done and a fave
September 6th, 2026 07:57
sorenbarrett said:
It is the message so cleverly said in rhyme that gets the fave. It is so common to let a dream rule a relationship to try and mold another to fit your form and image of ideal. People are not perfect but are they perfect for you. Well done and a fave
September 6th, 2026 07:57
Forgive me.
Fränz Müller said:
Sometimes we are more in love with the people we think they are, or could be, than the actual person standing before us…great work!
September 6th, 2026 07:28
Fränz Müller said:
Sometimes we are more in love with the people we think they are, or could be, than the actual person standing before us…great work!
September 6th, 2026 07:28
Hi Honey
sorenbarrett said:
A great analogy with the honey and words. Well written in regard to comfort and friends and how honey is sticky. Well done.
August 14th, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
A great analogy with the honey and words. Well written in regard to comfort and friends and how honey is sticky. Well done.
August 14th, 2026 04:12
Stapled Better
tallisman said:
Really good, actually. Love the stapled heart….
July 23rd, 2022 08:46
tallisman said:
Really good, actually. Love the stapled heart….
July 23rd, 2022 08:46
