Comments received on poems by Mark The Phenomenon
A Gentle Breath
sorenbarrett said:
This poem feels like a change of the seasons. Nicely written
May 2nd, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
This poem feels like a change of the seasons. Nicely written
May 2nd, 2026 04:35
Green Shoots Begin To Peek
sorenbarrett said:
Bright and airy it calls out for summer. Nicely written
April 27th, 2026 19:17
sorenbarrett said:
Bright and airy it calls out for summer. Nicely written
April 27th, 2026 19:17
Angry Skies
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded and rhymed this poem equates nature\'s storms with God\'s anger. Well written with good meter and rhyme
April 25th, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded and rhymed this poem equates nature\'s storms with God\'s anger. Well written with good meter and rhyme
April 25th, 2026 04:21
The World Is loud
sorenbarrett said:
Most sad the disintegration of humanity in this poem
April 20th, 2026 17:23
sorenbarrett said:
Most sad the disintegration of humanity in this poem
April 20th, 2026 17:23
God\'s Sad Heart
sorenbarrett said:
This a well written poem of failing faith and a concern God holds. It is foreboding. Well written
April 19th, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
This a well written poem of failing faith and a concern God holds. It is foreboding. Well written
April 19th, 2026 04:27
Forevermore
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of giving a sacrifice for the future generation, nicely said
April 16th, 2026 10:26
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of giving a sacrifice for the future generation, nicely said
April 16th, 2026 10:26
Forevermore
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem expresses a deep commitment to ensuring a brighter future for children, highlighting the sacrifices made for their dreams and well-being.
April 16th, 2026 09:13
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem expresses a deep commitment to ensuring a brighter future for children, highlighting the sacrifices made for their dreams and well-being.
April 16th, 2026 09:13
My children\'s children
sorenbarrett said:
A devoted one leaving a legacy well written
April 13th, 2026 14:35
sorenbarrett said:
A devoted one leaving a legacy well written
April 13th, 2026 14:35
No Beds
sorenbarrett said:
A romantic and sensuous poem of passion ignited. Well done with such good wording and rhyme.
December 14th, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
A romantic and sensuous poem of passion ignited. Well done with such good wording and rhyme.
December 14th, 2025 03:49
Bed Filled With Roses
Poetic Licence said:
A sensual and erotic description of creating a wonderful baby, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 11:08
Poetic Licence said:
A sensual and erotic description of creating a wonderful baby, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 11:08
Bed Filled With Roses
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual. errotic, sexual this poem oozes with flesh and heat. Nicely done
July 30th, 2025 10:42
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual. errotic, sexual this poem oozes with flesh and heat. Nicely done
July 30th, 2025 10:42
Distant Lands
Poetic Licence said:
I love this, so nicely expressed and written, wonderful imagery, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 09:59
Poetic Licence said:
I love this, so nicely expressed and written, wonderful imagery, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 09:59
Distant Lands
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful scene in this poem with great images leaving a feeling that is wistful and magic.
July 23rd, 2025 08:44
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful scene in this poem with great images leaving a feeling that is wistful and magic.
July 23rd, 2025 08:44
Red Passion
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a nicely crafted write of the different interpretations of what the colour red can represent, enjoyed the read
July 19th, 2025 00:04
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a nicely crafted write of the different interpretations of what the colour red can represent, enjoyed the read
July 19th, 2025 00:04
Sky High
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written sensual and sexual write, taking you through the journey to peak pleasure, nicely done
July 16th, 2025 18:12
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written sensual and sexual write, taking you through the journey to peak pleasure, nicely done
July 16th, 2025 18:12
Sky High
sorenbarrett said:
Nature\'s images mixed with the errotic, the sensual, sexual and romantic. Nicely done
July 16th, 2025 15:09
sorenbarrett said:
Nature\'s images mixed with the errotic, the sensual, sexual and romantic. Nicely done
July 16th, 2025 15:09
A World That’s Still
sorenbarrett said:
Like the continual beat of a hammer the rhyme at the end of each line, strikes and rings and nail of a hard bell Sounding out frustration. The message comes through loud and clear.
December 1st, 2024 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
Like the continual beat of a hammer the rhyme at the end of each line, strikes and rings and nail of a hard bell Sounding out frustration. The message comes through loud and clear.
December 1st, 2024 05:33
Because I Love you
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge of love Embossed in violence. Anger to defend love nicely written.
November 28th, 2024 16:57
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge of love Embossed in violence. Anger to defend love nicely written.
November 28th, 2024 16:57
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