Comments received on poems by Mark The Phenomenon



Position In Life
sorenbarrett said:

Good advice nicely done

July 31st, 2024 11:45

Are We Animals?
sorenbarrett said:

Interesting questions that many ask. All depends on definitions and beliefs. A good write

July 29th, 2024 13:30

Are We Animals?
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 29th, 2024 13:13

Courage Within Me
sorenbarrett said:

A good message that all should personalize and take to heart

July 28th, 2024 05:42

The Day Of The Lord
sorenbarrett said:

Some great lines in this piece with metaphor and rhyme. Nicely done

July 27th, 2024 05:39

I am An Eagle
sorenbarrett said:

Beware of poachers looking for feathers. Great write and positive attitude.

July 26th, 2024 05:50

The Breaking Point
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

July 22nd, 2024 19:36

Let Me Walk
Caring dove said:

Beautiful writing

July 21st, 2024 00:34

The Scent Of City’s Aroma
Caring dove said:

A lovely and interesting writing .. nicely expressed )

July 20th, 2024 02:02

The Scent Of City’s Aroma
2781 said:

I like a walk around a city.

July 20th, 2024 00:10

Neck Kisses
Tony36 said:

Beautiful write

July 19th, 2024 09:55

Neck Kisses
sorenbarrett said:



July 19th, 2024 05:17

Neck Kisses
sorenbarrett said:

Sensual, seductive, sexual all in a flowing rhyme. Nicely done.

July 19th, 2024 05:17

A FairyTale
Tony36 said:

Love it

July 18th, 2024 09:51

Wandering Mind
sorenbarrett said:

Graphically written this speaks to me. \"and the emptiness grows like a wall\" A great line that conveys so much meaning.

July 17th, 2024 10:13

Wandering Mind
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

July 17th, 2024 09:19

Admiration
Tony36 said:

Excellent

July 16th, 2024 09:55

A Witness To Happiness
orchidee said:

Good write M.

July 26th, 2023 01:57

A Witness To Happiness
Parisab said:

Heart warming words FR-your poem connects with the reader because your heart is in it! ‘Proud to do what I can so your story be told’

July 25th, 2023 20:43

A Soft Whistler
Bobby O said:

Nice flow and cool phrasing. That ending was sorta stark and has me trying to unwind it to fully get a grasp.

May 22nd, 2023 08:55

Healed
Bobby O said:

Grateful barely covers it. Exuberance ??

April 28th, 2023 16:48

To My Demon
amepiesces said:

what a nice read and such a relatable emotion ...

April 7th, 2023 10:48

To My Demon
L. B. Mek said:

yeah, you\'re awesome!
thanks for sharing
\'How do I hate you? Let me count the ways.\'
lol
nicely articulated!

April 7th, 2023 03:10

Ode to the Ghost
L. B. Mek said:

Elizabeth Browning would approve
lol
a lovely envisioning of inspiration and muse
thanks for sharing

April 3rd, 2023 04:54

For My Sweet Flower
Parisab said:

Very amusing and lovely descriptions of your muse

March 31st, 2023 23:29

A Wilted Flower
Eugene S. said:

I recognize the struggles of youth in these words. Again, well said dear poet.

March 5th, 2023 09:05

Standing Still
Eugene S. said:

Interesting! Death being the release, providing the freedom of movement. Thought provoking and alluding to a truly painful life. Well expressed fellow poet!

March 5th, 2023 09:03

Ok To Admit You’re Not Ok
L. B. Mek said:

(or a mother, guiding
her daughter or older son
we all need, someone
to shine a light, so we can find
our path in life..)
an important write and message
thanks for sharing

March 3rd, 2023 06:48

Ok To Admit You’re Not Ok
David Wakeling said:

This is okay.I like the message and the rhyme Well done

March 3rd, 2023 02:00

Ok To Admit You’re Not Ok
Ok Waleed said:

I am ok!

March 3rd, 2023 01:50

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