Comments received on poems by lane.rowe
Waves
L. B. Mek said:
\'enough
this shit too rough
I’m tryna plot
A way to stop
This anxious boss
that lives inside
My mind
The tension and tears
Aren’t worth my years\'
Brilliant!
(more power
to your self-liberating poetic voice
ink free, do you)
stay strong!
May 5th, 2023 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'enough
this shit too rough
I’m tryna plot
A way to stop
This anxious boss
that lives inside
My mind
The tension and tears
Aren’t worth my years\'
Brilliant!
(more power
to your self-liberating poetic voice
ink free, do you)
stay strong!
May 5th, 2023 04:59
River song
arqios said:
Reading this brings a blend of river thoughts; first, the river that ran through my grandparents\' plot of land where I learned to swim but only after first having drowned and was fished out of and the ingested water pumped pumped out of my 4 year old belly. The second is the river at the end of the 1967 Jungle Book animation where Mowgli returns to the Man Village and develops a crush on a village girl who was fetching a jar of water. Cool stuff.
October 19th, 2022 01:18
arqios said:
Reading this brings a blend of river thoughts; first, the river that ran through my grandparents\' plot of land where I learned to swim but only after first having drowned and was fished out of and the ingested water pumped pumped out of my 4 year old belly. The second is the river at the end of the 1967 Jungle Book animation where Mowgli returns to the Man Village and develops a crush on a village girl who was fetching a jar of water. Cool stuff.
October 19th, 2022 01:18
ocd
L. B. Mek said:
\'Her life was upside down
And the ceiling felt like the ground,
A structure of madness
A path complete
Four corners
No curves
Just a soft place for two feet
To tread along
in the calmness of a pond
The imaginative textile beauties of lily pads
Except it was not that
The ceiling was clean
In a sharpened way
neat\'..
Brilliant!!!
(there\'s a lot I would love to unravel
and interpret in my reading of this exemplary work
of feisty, self-expression
but I fear I would only you impose upon
what must feel to you
like such a unique and intimate work)
so instead, I\'ll just state
categorically
dear Poet, I think you\'re Brilliant!
keep writing & stay strong
I wish you peace!
(and
however unfortunate the results
of their actions
I clearly see, Why
your parents, Chose
to invest in You, as
Your defiantly radiating, complex
Personality, deserves nothing less!
showcased, so emphatically
in these words you share..)
\'stay Beautiful, stay You\'
May 24th, 2022 04:29
L. B. Mek said:
\'Her life was upside down
And the ceiling felt like the ground,
A structure of madness
A path complete
Four corners
No curves
Just a soft place for two feet
To tread along
in the calmness of a pond
The imaginative textile beauties of lily pads
Except it was not that
The ceiling was clean
In a sharpened way
neat\'..
Brilliant!!!
(there\'s a lot I would love to unravel
and interpret in my reading of this exemplary work
of feisty, self-expression
but I fear I would only you impose upon
what must feel to you
like such a unique and intimate work)
so instead, I\'ll just state
categorically
dear Poet, I think you\'re Brilliant!
keep writing & stay strong
I wish you peace!
(and
however unfortunate the results
of their actions
I clearly see, Why
your parents, Chose
to invest in You, as
Your defiantly radiating, complex
Personality, deserves nothing less!
showcased, so emphatically
in these words you share..)
\'stay Beautiful, stay You\'
May 24th, 2022 04:29
