Comments received on poems by Jonas Robinson



My dream of Socrates
hotidris said:

Good poem about your dream of Socrates.

September 26th, 2022 21:10

My dream of Socrates
crypticbard said:

Awesome concept this Jungian Quakerism. I suppose there must be community and awareness for that to occur! Perhaps a communal reading would spice things up around the fire now that Autumn has started its etching upon the last stretch of calendar. Thanks for sharing.

September 25th, 2022 16:50

A bran new home
Paul Bell said:

Like the flow, reads great backwards too.

August 27th, 2022 06:25

A bran new home
hotidris said:

Neat poem about a bran new home.

August 25th, 2022 19:20

A bran new home
crypticbard said:

It is quite fun, the concepts and choices of words. Thanks for the travels this his brought.

August 24th, 2022 18:08

Vinegar Oil Chips
Jonas Robinson said:

I appreciate the feedback and critique of all of those who have replied to this poem. :)

August 24th, 2022 14:34

Vinegar Oil Chips
Aradhya said:

not quite sure i understand jonas, but it\'s interesting, thought provoking and i absolutely loved the word flow.

August 24th, 2022 08:50

Vinegar Oil Chips
hotidris said:

Nice poem about the women who are in therapy for their addiction to vinegar oil chips.

August 23rd, 2022 22:43

Vinegar Oil Chips
MissDulcinea said:

Interesting and provocative. I don’t quite understand, but that’s okay. Definitely thought provoking.

August 23rd, 2022 06:34

A chant of disciplines
KeneBujold said:

Not sure why you would be worried about critique on this one Jonas? It\'s great. Had me from the opening couplet and it never let go until the end

August 22nd, 2022 23:11

Vinegar Oil Chips
KeneBujold said:

not sure I understand it Jonas, which makes it all the more interesting as I enjoy provocative thoughts that challenge me to think outside my own box

August 22nd, 2022 23:07

A time in flames
hotidris said:

Excellent poem about a pyramid prism that\'s high in the sky.

August 21st, 2022 19:04

A chant of disciplines
hotidris said:

Neat poem about a chant of disciplines.

May 29th, 2022 21:14

In beauty and exile
sharon magrath said:

Well written Jonas!

May 28th, 2022 20:45

In beauty and exile
tommytoons said:

Beautiful.

May 28th, 2022 20:32

The passion of romance
crypticbard said:

To have found the answer to our imperfections, that indeed is truly beautiful. Thanks for sharing, Jonas. /Rik.

May 28th, 2022 19:25

In beauty and exile
orchidee said:

Oh, I should steer clear of occult and matters of spookiness, I say!

May 27th, 2022 01:59

In beauty and exile
hotidris said:

Excellent poem about the culture of horror, the culture of beauty, and the love of your life.

May 26th, 2022 22:45

The passion of romance
a thousand wishes said:

This was amazing

May 25th, 2022 20:30