Comments received on poems by Morwenna
A moment of grace
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sight put into words Morwenna.
Andy
October 5th, 2022 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sight put into words Morwenna.
Andy
October 5th, 2022 01:45
A moment of grace
MendedFences27 said:
The English countryside can be a very pastoral setting, but a \"winding river,\" \"flat plains,\" and a \"galloping\" \"white horse,\" is idyllic. You were very fortunate to see these images.
Your poem expressed this vision with clarity and emotion. Your final two lines left me wondering what was the \"final stop.\"
Enjoyed this one a lot. - Phil A.
October 4th, 2022 18:47
MendedFences27 said:
The English countryside can be a very pastoral setting, but a \"winding river,\" \"flat plains,\" and a \"galloping\" \"white horse,\" is idyllic. You were very fortunate to see these images.
Your poem expressed this vision with clarity and emotion. Your final two lines left me wondering what was the \"final stop.\"
Enjoyed this one a lot. - Phil A.
October 4th, 2022 18:47
A moment of grace
Doggerel Dave said:
I love train rides, Morwenna -your piece captures perfectly the kind of experiences accessible from a train window. Thanks.
October 4th, 2022 17:57
Doggerel Dave said:
I love train rides, Morwenna -your piece captures perfectly the kind of experiences accessible from a train window. Thanks.
October 4th, 2022 17:57
A day out at the beach
Doggerel Dave said:
A subtle change in consciousness beautifully pinned (no mistype - pinned).
Good to see you again, Morwenna.
October 1st, 2022 20:50
Doggerel Dave said:
A subtle change in consciousness beautifully pinned (no mistype - pinned).
Good to see you again, Morwenna.
October 1st, 2022 20:50
Dislocation
Fay Slimm. said:
A captivating snippet of your happy revisit to a continent of exotic memories Morwenna - thank you for sharing some of your fantastic childhood in exciting Africa.
September 14th, 2022 17:21
Fay Slimm. said:
A captivating snippet of your happy revisit to a continent of exotic memories Morwenna - thank you for sharing some of your fantastic childhood in exciting Africa.
September 14th, 2022 17:21
Dislocation
Doggerel Dave said:
So here you casually ( well - not casually, but deliberately) disclose in poetic form a whole part of your life hitherto hidden.
What an enjoyable surprise, Morwenna.
September 14th, 2022 06:41
Doggerel Dave said:
So here you casually ( well - not casually, but deliberately) disclose in poetic form a whole part of your life hitherto hidden.
What an enjoyable surprise, Morwenna.
September 14th, 2022 06:41
My life in lipstick
Doggerel Dave said:
Still don\'t understand.....
I can appreciate the fun, Morwenna, if not the sentiments.
But who am I to judge?....Too late, I have........
August 29th, 2022 02:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Still don\'t understand.....
I can appreciate the fun, Morwenna, if not the sentiments.
But who am I to judge?....Too late, I have........
August 29th, 2022 02:05
My life in lipstick
Fay Slimm. said:
An impressive write Morwenna - -- the use lipstick makes to a changing life with a final stanza on choosing what shade could suit the finalé makes a really arresting read.
August 16th, 2022 16:26
Fay Slimm. said:
An impressive write Morwenna - -- the use lipstick makes to a changing life with a final stanza on choosing what shade could suit the finalé makes a really arresting read.
August 16th, 2022 16:26
These hands
Doggerel Dave said:
Woah Morwenna! I know wot\'s not far away, but I\'ll contemplate it\'s arrival in my own time, thank you!
My hands are as smooth as silk, (I use a moisturiser) and thankfully, they don\'t give anything away......😊
Doesn\'t mean I don\'t like your poem - I do!
July 14th, 2022 23:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Woah Morwenna! I know wot\'s not far away, but I\'ll contemplate it\'s arrival in my own time, thank you!
My hands are as smooth as silk, (I use a moisturiser) and thankfully, they don\'t give anything away......😊
Doesn\'t mean I don\'t like your poem - I do!
July 14th, 2022 23:56
Time and being
L. B. Mek said:
a read I could relate with
so easily..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(Personally
I surrender to the inevitability
of stages, in a life..
try to cherish the best
of my past
and attempt
to squeeze out, all the yield
in my present
all the rest, I leave to fate
trying not to waste
that modicum of control
I\'m afforded..)
July 4th, 2022 03:24
L. B. Mek said:
a read I could relate with
so easily..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(Personally
I surrender to the inevitability
of stages, in a life..
try to cherish the best
of my past
and attempt
to squeeze out, all the yield
in my present
all the rest, I leave to fate
trying not to waste
that modicum of control
I\'m afforded..)
July 4th, 2022 03:24
Time and being
Doggerel Dave said:
Well summarised, Morwenna - My twenty years of retirement (longer than I ever spent in any of the many jobs I had during an extensive and varied working life) has been great and I\'ve enjoyed every one of them.
I hope both you and I have many more.
July 3rd, 2022 19:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Well summarised, Morwenna - My twenty years of retirement (longer than I ever spent in any of the many jobs I had during an extensive and varied working life) has been great and I\'ve enjoyed every one of them.
I hope both you and I have many more.
July 3rd, 2022 19:36
Contentment
sorenbarrett said:
Well written and very identifiable. The metering was so good it felt rhymed.
June 30th, 2022 18:18
sorenbarrett said:
Well written and very identifiable. The metering was so good it felt rhymed.
June 30th, 2022 18:18
Contentment
Doggerel Dave said:
How was that bench, Morwenna? Your contentment is infectious - I know of such a bench and will be in occupation this afternoon.
Simple but rich verse.
June 30th, 2022 17:44
Doggerel Dave said:
How was that bench, Morwenna? Your contentment is infectious - I know of such a bench and will be in occupation this afternoon.
Simple but rich verse.
June 30th, 2022 17:44
Contentment
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a fetching view of pure contentment Morwenna - - what better way to spend a warm afternoon than in harmony with other creatures of nature - - I applaud your description of that fluffy chilled-out pigeon sitting in treed meditation..
June 30th, 2022 16:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a fetching view of pure contentment Morwenna - - what better way to spend a warm afternoon than in harmony with other creatures of nature - - I applaud your description of that fluffy chilled-out pigeon sitting in treed meditation..
June 30th, 2022 16:28
Easy Happiness
Doggerel Dave said:
One can only hope, Morwenna.
All that can be done is to make our feelings known, attempt to convince others.
Meantime, I should only enjoy the present moment.....
As you made very clear in a good shortie.
June 28th, 2022 19:20
Doggerel Dave said:
One can only hope, Morwenna.
All that can be done is to make our feelings known, attempt to convince others.
Meantime, I should only enjoy the present moment.....
As you made very clear in a good shortie.
June 28th, 2022 19:20
Counting my assets
Blueledge said:
It\'s good that you\'ve reminded me to appreciate as an asset, the things I take for granted.
June 26th, 2022 01:04
Blueledge said:
It\'s good that you\'ve reminded me to appreciate as an asset, the things I take for granted.
June 26th, 2022 01:04
Counting my assets
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a fine penning of assets that no money can ever buy - so pleased I caught this lovely tribute to the treasures of nature - thank you Morwenna for an inspiring last read tonight.
June 25th, 2022 17:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a fine penning of assets that no money can ever buy - so pleased I caught this lovely tribute to the treasures of nature - thank you Morwenna for an inspiring last read tonight.
June 25th, 2022 17:43
Counting my assets
Morwenna said:
Indeed. And I do - and roar with laughter at times. Like earlier today. Thank you!
June 25th, 2022 16:57
Morwenna said:
Indeed. And I do - and roar with laughter at times. Like earlier today. Thank you!
June 25th, 2022 16:57
Counting my assets
dusk arising said:
This reliable asset which affirms your faith and love in life itself and the beauty of the world around you.
For you could not write as you have here without it being so.
Smile often.
June 25th, 2022 16:56
dusk arising said:
This reliable asset which affirms your faith and love in life itself and the beauty of the world around you.
For you could not write as you have here without it being so.
Smile often.
June 25th, 2022 16:56
Botswana: Molepole
Morwenna said:
I\'ve never been to Madaascar, sadly. I\'d love to have been.
June 24th, 2022 11:50
Morwenna said:
I\'ve never been to Madaascar, sadly. I\'d love to have been.
June 24th, 2022 11:50
Botswana: Molepole
Morwenna said:
Thank you for your understanding. It was a beautiful walk among \'weeds\'.
June 24th, 2022 03:34
Morwenna said:
Thank you for your understanding. It was a beautiful walk among \'weeds\'.
June 24th, 2022 03:34
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