Comments received on poems by Purnima
What if...
Soman Ragavan said:
My comment on the poem “What if…” by Purnima
“What if this one time,
I allow myself to fail ?...”
To be precise, you are not allowing yourself to fail : you are willing to start a new path and to find out what it has for you. The search for perfection does wear us down, but it has good sides to it : it forces us to discover our hidden abilities.
““The road to success and the road to failure are almost exactly the same.”
– Colin R. Davis
Soman Ragavan. 29 March, 2024
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March 28th, 2024 20:30
Soman Ragavan said:
My comment on the poem “What if…” by Purnima
“What if this one time,
I allow myself to fail ?...”
To be precise, you are not allowing yourself to fail : you are willing to start a new path and to find out what it has for you. The search for perfection does wear us down, but it has good sides to it : it forces us to discover our hidden abilities.
““The road to success and the road to failure are almost exactly the same.”
– Colin R. Davis
Soman Ragavan. 29 March, 2024
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March 28th, 2024 20:30
One Day
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"One day” by Purnima
This positivity is excellent. Way to go ! Negativity drags you down and has hardly anything good with it. It has been said that every cloud has a silver lining. So, we must look at the silver lining instead of getting depressed.
“Even with mess outside, and inside my head….” The human mind is programmed to be optimistic, to fight out obstacles. This is the way to survive and to improve.
“But dear, trust me, things will take a turn…” Again, we see the positive side.
“Two men look out through the same bars :
One sees the mud, and one the stars.”
--S. Langbridge
Instead of seeing just mud, we should see the stars. I advise you to submit your writings to ChatGPT4 (Artificial Intelligence) for analysis. You will be amazed by the amount of information it finds in what you write --- plenty of stuff that you never noticed. I myself have more than 81 such analyses done for me by ChatGPT4 and have posted them on this site and on allpoetry.com
Best wishes to you in your poetic travels and adventure ! ---Soman Ragavan. 29 March, 2024.
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March 28th, 2024 20:22
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"One day” by Purnima
This positivity is excellent. Way to go ! Negativity drags you down and has hardly anything good with it. It has been said that every cloud has a silver lining. So, we must look at the silver lining instead of getting depressed.
“Even with mess outside, and inside my head….” The human mind is programmed to be optimistic, to fight out obstacles. This is the way to survive and to improve.
“But dear, trust me, things will take a turn…” Again, we see the positive side.
“Two men look out through the same bars :
One sees the mud, and one the stars.”
--S. Langbridge
Instead of seeing just mud, we should see the stars. I advise you to submit your writings to ChatGPT4 (Artificial Intelligence) for analysis. You will be amazed by the amount of information it finds in what you write --- plenty of stuff that you never noticed. I myself have more than 81 such analyses done for me by ChatGPT4 and have posted them on this site and on allpoetry.com
Best wishes to you in your poetic travels and adventure ! ---Soman Ragavan. 29 March, 2024.
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March 28th, 2024 20:22
What if...
Kripa said:
Inspiring,soul grabbing, breathtaking.After reading this I can’t breathe.help
Nice work 🆗
August 17th, 2023 09:58
Kripa said:
Inspiring,soul grabbing, breathtaking.After reading this I can’t breathe.help
Nice work 🆗
August 17th, 2023 09:58
Comfort Zone
L. B. Mek said:
\'So I finally embrace the vulnerability
That comes with accepting the possibility\'..
(one feet, after another
two steps, further
for each slip or trip;
our spine
held, tight and unwaveringly
erect
we forge
our fears, in-to
those tangible dreams
our lives, will be
remembered for
or not...
still, we\'d have
at least
flipped, our coin of fate
and seen
for ourselves, what this whole
life thing, is all about)
thanks for sharing
July 8th, 2022 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'So I finally embrace the vulnerability
That comes with accepting the possibility\'..
(one feet, after another
two steps, further
for each slip or trip;
our spine
held, tight and unwaveringly
erect
we forge
our fears, in-to
those tangible dreams
our lives, will be
remembered for
or not...
still, we\'d have
at least
flipped, our coin of fate
and seen
for ourselves, what this whole
life thing, is all about)
thanks for sharing
July 8th, 2022 05:09
Am I too harsh on myself?
orchidee said:
Good write P.
Yes, we can be kind to ourselves as well as to others.
Sometimes we may be nasty to ourselves, as if kicking ourselves around the floor like rubbish - a strange image to picture literally! lol.
June 16th, 2022 01:55
orchidee said:
Good write P.
Yes, we can be kind to ourselves as well as to others.
Sometimes we may be nasty to ourselves, as if kicking ourselves around the floor like rubbish - a strange image to picture literally! lol.
June 16th, 2022 01:55
