Comments received on poems by churd17



I Hate You
tommytoons said:

I have been in that place, though I try hard not to hate, hurt is hurt.

June 27th, 2022 14:33

I Hate You
Raven333 said:

Yes, I certainly can feel your hate in those words but I do have to say as I was reading those words someone\'s name from my past dam sure popped in my head. loved it

June 27th, 2022 13:26

I Hate You
Dxtra14 said:

Lively piece. Can definitely feel the pulse in it. I\'ve felt that pain before, and writing (especially poetry) became a life vest for me, which I\'m sure you can attest.

June 27th, 2022 12:59

To My Surprise
L. B. Mek said:

dreaming of it, is half the journey
towards having it be realised
in your everyday reality..
love, thy self
first!
above all else, treasure
your worth
without you needing anyone
to value, you!
and its ok, if you think
you ain\'t all that, today
for hopefully, you have
the rest of the day
and your remaining, tomorrow\'s
to work towards being the person
you want to become..
then, as your path becomes
easier to traverse
and you become too, busy
to worry about love
or being acknowledged
when
you can look in the mirror
and smile at that imperfect
reflection
cos you know, how hard
you worked, to get where you are
to Realise, your dreams
then
goodness, will be drawn to you
and from that will blossom
the connection that will gift you
what you need in life..
but
it all begins, when You
love Yourslef, like
you wish others, would Love
You..!
(forgive my tangent
I meant no disrespect, sadly
so many of us, waste our time
waiting for love
when, its more like
Love is waiting on Us
to fall in love
with ourselves..!)


June 27th, 2022 04:17

To My Surprise
Raven333 said:

I loved this poem, I only wish that could happen to me.. nicely written

June 27th, 2022 01:47